
4/15/2005 c1
25La Velvetine
It has been said Raphael had a hot, steamy affair with one of Rome's most beautiful courtesans whose name I have forgotten. So you see, he was not just concerned with Madonnas and comissions of the Pope. But this, right here, is good literature. Nice!

It has been said Raphael had a hot, steamy affair with one of Rome's most beautiful courtesans whose name I have forgotten. So you see, he was not just concerned with Madonnas and comissions of the Pope. But this, right here, is good literature. Nice!
12/15/2003 c1
45Simple Enigma
wow, thats reaally good, its got a subtle rhym scheme that holds it together nicley and a fantastic ending. I loves its yes precious. . . sorry. (gollum shut up)

wow, thats reaally good, its got a subtle rhym scheme that holds it together nicley and a fantastic ending. I loves its yes precious. . . sorry. (gollum shut up)
12/13/2003 c1
13Tenshi No Tenrai
very interesting... I don't understand the Renaissance or art very much, if at all... but your poem was very well written, very beautiful... nicely done! (and thanks for R&R-ing my stuff!)
*~::Kourtnée::~*

very interesting... I don't understand the Renaissance or art very much, if at all... but your poem was very well written, very beautiful... nicely done! (and thanks for R&R-ing my stuff!)
*~::Kourtnée::~*
12/13/2003 c1
7ERZSBET HACKER
OH MY GOD That was really really really good Corrine H. It even ryhmed...and that can sometimes be tricky! Kazza to you!

OH MY GOD That was really really really good Corrine H. It even ryhmed...and that can sometimes be tricky! Kazza to you!
12/13/2003 c1
127mercury-phoenix
That's really good. It really describes how the person who's point of view it's from is feeling. You are talented. GO YOU!

That's really good. It really describes how the person who's point of view it's from is feeling. You are talented. GO YOU!