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12/13/2003 c1 11Misoshiru
wow! this poem is good. weird and a bit scary, but good. keep it up
12/13/2003 c1 JackKarson
All you do is repeat yourself. You dont show hate in the poem, you show you know how to whine and complain. Try using poetic devices, make the reader feel the hate and anger.
12/13/2003 c1 KerouacandGin
I can totally relate. My mom's ex-boyfriend was an asshole too.

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