for White Rose2/12/2010 c1 
23thinking.about.thinking
I'm imagining a dark cemetery in the winter...wonderful imagery.
thinking.about.thinking
23thinking.about.thinkingI'm imagining a dark cemetery in the winter...wonderful imagery.
thinking.about.thinking
4/8/2006 c1 74laughter at the funeral
wow, another deliciously sounding poem with that snowberry poison...very good job..
truly yours...
74laughter at the funeralwow, another deliciously sounding poem with that snowberry poison...very good job..
truly yours...
7/6/2004 c1 9sheza
i have yet to figure out the meaning of the word "haiku"...but i really, really loved your poem...excellent job!
9shezai have yet to figure out the meaning of the word "haiku"...but i really, really loved your poem...excellent job!
3/6/2004 c1 133bach-player
"snowberry poison"...i liked this image alot...i'm into poison imagery also
133bach-player"snowberry poison"...i liked this image alot...i'm into poison imagery also
12/28/2003 c1 laciemn
oh...I like.
the wording is beautiful and unusual.
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you like Red Hot Chili Peppers too! you cool^_~
oh...I like.
the wording is beautiful and unusual.
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you like Red Hot Chili Peppers too! you cool^_~
12/27/2003 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
*sigh* how perfectly perfect...only you could both conjure an image of a quiet winter suicide and make it seem somehow beautiful...drops of red on white...
~lyv
127godawful teen-angst poetry*sigh* how perfectly perfect...only you could both conjure an image of a quiet winter suicide and make it seem somehow beautiful...drops of red on white...
~lyv
12/24/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
nice piece. dark and angsty, vivid imagery and good use of metaphor. i like this. great job!
36obsidian katananice piece. dark and angsty, vivid imagery and good use of metaphor. i like this. great job!
12/22/2003 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
This is amazing. The type of haiku I aspire to.
-Jessica
123breakdown in the waiting roomThis is amazing. The type of haiku I aspire to.
-Jessica
12/22/2003 c1 128VanishedUser123456789
Interesting piece. Captures the spirit of haiku very well, I think. Both playful and painful.
Thanks for the review!
128VanishedUser123456789Interesting piece. Captures the spirit of haiku very well, I think. Both playful and painful.
Thanks for the review!
12/22/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
The image and the use of the color white gives me chills.
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100The image and the use of the color white gives me chills.
~Heart of the Sword
12/22/2003 c1 121Seeker of the Way
Again, a great way of expressing yourself. This seems like it has so much behind it. It goes straight to my sub-concious!
121Seeker of the WayAgain, a great way of expressing yourself. This seems like it has so much behind it. It goes straight to my sub-concious!