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2/12/2010 c1 23thinking.about.thinking
I'm imagining a dark cemetery in the winter...wonderful imagery.

thinking.about.thinking
4/8/2006 c1 74laughter at the funeral
wow, another deliciously sounding poem with that snowberry poison...very good job..

truly yours...
7/6/2004 c1 9sheza
i have yet to figure out the meaning of the word "haiku"...but i really, really loved your poem...excellent job!
3/10/2004 c1 52FAKEromances
i liked the bit: "snowberry poison".
3/6/2004 c1 133bach-player
"snowberry poison"...i liked this image alot...i'm into poison imagery also
1/30/2004 c1 161chairmanmeow
Oh, wow. Delightful to analyze, this.
1/19/2004 c1 4darkperversion
AWESOME
1/6/2004 c1 168SeaVoi
Cool I like that one!
12/28/2003 c1 laciemn
oh...I like.
the wording is beautiful and unusual.
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you like Red Hot Chili Peppers too! you cool^_~
12/27/2003 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
*sigh* how perfectly perfect...only you could both conjure an image of a quiet winter suicide and make it seem somehow beautiful...drops of red on white...
~lyv
12/24/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
nice piece. dark and angsty, vivid imagery and good use of metaphor. i like this. great job!
12/22/2003 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
This is amazing. The type of haiku I aspire to.
-Jessica
12/22/2003 c1 128VanishedUser123456789
Interesting piece. Captures the spirit of haiku very well, I think. Both playful and painful.
Thanks for the review!
12/22/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
The image and the use of the color white gives me chills.
~Heart of the Sword
12/22/2003 c1 121Seeker of the Way
Again, a great way of expressing yourself. This seems like it has so much behind it. It goes straight to my sub-concious!
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