for Why Not?11/23/2005 c1 
50Chandra-Moon
you have quite an authentic style...I think you could become quite good.I liked the "seize the day" mood of this. Again, good job, and thank you for writing this-it put me in quite a good mood.
50Chandra-Moonyou have quite an authentic style...I think you could become quite good.I liked the "seize the day" mood of this. Again, good job, and thank you for writing this-it put me in quite a good mood.
6/13/2005 c1 10Ashley Tucker
I like this. It has a kind of...myterious twing to it...hmm...my favorite part is the 'discard that umbrella and walk in therain'part. I love that. Ash
10Ashley TuckerI like this. It has a kind of...myterious twing to it...hmm...my favorite part is the 'discard that umbrella and walk in therain'part. I love that. Ash
7/17/2004 c1 13lilGyMnAsTcHiC
Cool dude- maybe I'll do some of those things! Pretty good poem, I like =)
13lilGyMnAsTcHiCCool dude- maybe I'll do some of those things! Pretty good poem, I like =)
1/26/2004 c1 r-sparkle
carraotcake89 again.
i liked that, except the formatting was hard to understand.
:)
carraotcake89 again.
i liked that, except the formatting was hard to understand.
:)
12/14/2003 c1 1Aidyn Valo
ehh. not bad. could use some better formatting. Please take a look at my stuff too.
1Aidyn Valoehh. not bad. could use some better formatting. Please take a look at my stuff too.