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10/17/2006 c1 1UniquelyNeverSeen
i love it ... it's the perfect ending... *tear*
11/21/2004 c1 Eva
Aw, so cute and fluffy! I enjoyed it a LOT. The only complaint I have is the sudden switch to first person towards the end, although you may want to work on making it sound a bit smoother altogether. But I love it! So gooey. Love ya, Eva.
10/13/2004 c1 Omlette Girl
Aw. . .such gooeyness! But just one thing. . .what was with the switch to first person for like three lines right towards the end? It threw off the otherwise perfectness.
12/14/2003 c1 5aiur
awz that's cute! i like this write more! though not maybe on this story i think it's basically done short and sweet =) great job
~k8
12/14/2003 c1 lil'poetgirl
thats kinda cute.. i like it. keep writing!
12/14/2003 c1 Natty
YAY! jue, you rock! lol, i love this story, such a happy story, but i think i told you all about that yesterday. anyway, keep writing (especially with cameron, *drool*) anyway, love ya lots, and i'll ttyl
*mouah!* (that's a big kiss in case it isn't clear)
love ya lots,
natty!

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