12/15/2003 c1 Masked Coconut
Huh. This is really cute so far, but aren't the kids a little mature for their ages, even if they are gifted? And I don't think that there's much chance of a six-foot six-year old. But other than this, this is a quite believable story. I like how the kids talk. I'd be willing to read more when you post it.
Huh. This is really cute so far, but aren't the kids a little mature for their ages, even if they are gifted? And I don't think that there's much chance of a six-foot six-year old. But other than this, this is a quite believable story. I like how the kids talk. I'd be willing to read more when you post it.