for A Murder Of 612/24/2011 c43 
1Born-of-Water
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OHMYGOD! So, normally, I just set an update alert for stories that I like, but this one deserves a review, I'm in love with it! The way that you've developed the unique personalities of the characters, and used the story to further their emotional growth is stunning! I really like what you've done with this story :) I serious CANNOT WAIT for a update! Anyways, thanks for publishing such a brilliant work of art for us fictionpressionians to read, and I'm anxious to see what you come up with in the next chapter XD
With much awe,
Born-of-Water
1Born-of-WaterOH MY GOD OH MY GOD OHMYGOD! So, normally, I just set an update alert for stories that I like, but this one deserves a review, I'm in love with it! The way that you've developed the unique personalities of the characters, and used the story to further their emotional growth is stunning! I really like what you've done with this story :) I serious CANNOT WAIT for a update! Anyways, thanks for publishing such a brilliant work of art for us fictionpressionians to read, and I'm anxious to see what you come up with in the next chapter XD
With much awe,
Born-of-Water
11/24/2011 c1 20EveningShades
Love your characters, i've always loved it when the female character is such a badass. I hope that the rest of your story will live up to the hard standards that this chapter sets. all in all good job, maybe you should get this story published? I think it would make it.
20EveningShadesLove your characters, i've always loved it when the female character is such a badass. I hope that the rest of your story will live up to the hard standards that this chapter sets. all in all good job, maybe you should get this story published? I think it would make it.
7/21/2011 c43 evilcleo
You about made my day when I saw this was updated. Took a bit to get through my email and find it though lol. Please do finish. I want to see how it all ends.
You about made my day when I saw this was updated. Took a bit to get through my email and find it though lol. Please do finish. I want to see how it all ends.
4/17/2011 c42 ObsceneFreak
Wow I really enjoyed this story. I can't wait for you to finish it. The only thing i could possibly critic you on is some misspelled words =) Everything else is awesome.
Wow I really enjoyed this story. I can't wait for you to finish it. The only thing i could possibly critic you on is some misspelled words =) Everything else is awesome.
1/2/2010 c42 Z
I believe that you have been misspelling the word "yeah" and spelling it as "ya".
The beginning of the story makes no sense; you may really want to explain things first before jumping right into the shooting. Also you may want to rearrange the order of the peices of the story.
I believe that you have been misspelling the word "yeah" and spelling it as "ya".
The beginning of the story makes no sense; you may really want to explain things first before jumping right into the shooting. Also you may want to rearrange the order of the peices of the story.
10/14/2008 c42 xoxokristen
Excellent story- i am going to fail my midterm because i couldn't stop reading it (jk, i won't fail, don't worry). Please update again soon, i want to know more about eien and cherry!
Excellent story- i am going to fail my midterm because i couldn't stop reading it (jk, i won't fail, don't worry). Please update again soon, i want to know more about eien and cherry!
8/24/2008 c42 daling
god please update babe. x))
but personally, i hate it when kreed flirts with peaches.
but thats because i love apples. hahaha.
neway,, update okay. ;DD
god please update babe. x))
but personally, i hate it when kreed flirts with peaches.
but thats because i love apples. hahaha.
neway,, update okay. ;DD
8/18/2008 c42 4Morgan Davis
OMG! if you could finish this in a month that would be so awesome! don't get me wrong, i love this story! but i want to know what happens! it is killing me! and dude! i have been waiting, like, what? three? four years? lol hurry and post more!
4Morgan DavisOMG! if you could finish this in a month that would be so awesome! don't get me wrong, i love this story! but i want to know what happens! it is killing me! and dude! i have been waiting, like, what? three? four years? lol hurry and post more!
8/18/2008 c42 evilcleo
Great update. It really made my day.
Great update. It really made my day.
8/18/2008 c42 atreyu love
love what kreed was saying about
dying and living (apples wedding etc.) haha.
but its sad for Cherry and Chase.
i do hope they end up happy and together!
PLEASE UPDATE!
love what kreed was saying about
dying and living (apples wedding etc.) haha.
but its sad for Cherry and Chase.
i do hope they end up happy and together!
PLEASE UPDATE!
5/17/2008 c41 atreyu love
OMG.
I was so psyched to read the whole story today..
and then i get to this chapter and the story wasnt complete! lol
i can not WAIT for you to update! i am absolutely in LOVE with this story :)
PLEASE UPDATE!
and i hope she doesnt die, i love Chase and her too much for that to happen!
OMG.
I was so psyched to read the whole story today..
and then i get to this chapter and the story wasnt complete! lol
i can not WAIT for you to update! i am absolutely in LOVE with this story :)
PLEASE UPDATE!
and i hope she doesnt die, i love Chase and her too much for that to happen!