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for My Fork

5/15/2006 c1 2Ledgant East
I love the end what drama you put into dinnertime.I suspect there is a metaphor somewhere in it but I cannot find it.
1/3/2004 c1 15a.reading.whore
that...is great. that has to be the best (and only) fork poem I've read...awesome job! you are wonderful!
12/20/2003 c1 Aredhel Carnesr
Haha!That was funny!I liked how you described why you liked it and the ending!:)
12/20/2003 c1 41ionlyliveindreams
Forks rock! Sporks rock more, but forks are still really cool... Anyways, great poem. Weird idea, but at least it's not cliched! This line is the best, "And pokes people when I'm in a bad mood" It made me laugh, but it's so true! :D Hehe, cool poem, I like it.
Keep writing
12/20/2003 c1 41Razor Sharp Kisses
Excuse my language, but there's an emphasis needed that I can't do without using words like that! GREAT!
12/19/2003 c1 18Sallie Beaver
Hehe...this poem is fun to read aloud! I see you are very much in love with your fork (as I with my pencil-good for poking too!)...I like it very much, especially the last line. It made me laugh.
KOW (as in keep on writing!)
12/18/2003 c1 36Marilynagram
lol.. Very funny... "You see, my fork I know is real".. Maybe comma after 'fork' and 'know'? Or change?
12/18/2003 c1 DMTS
Xf it's kinda cute. Very funny. Keep writing.
12/18/2003 c1 29black lipstick girl
12/17/2003 c1 Sungirl
I like it. Nice work.

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