for Dragontears4/28/2004 c4 
1Polezrael
As a dragon lover I must compliment you. You have done well, although I would put the four chapters into one chapter and draw out the part where the part where the old man reveiled to the boy the Dragon's Tear. You ended it rather beautifully, and over all, I really liked it.
~Ezrael Nhrive
1PolezraelAs a dragon lover I must compliment you. You have done well, although I would put the four chapters into one chapter and draw out the part where the part where the old man reveiled to the boy the Dragon's Tear. You ended it rather beautifully, and over all, I really liked it.
~Ezrael Nhrive
1/3/2004 c4 15a.reading.whore
that was really cool. I especially liked the first bit where you talked about what it was like with dragons- I felt as if I was there. good job!
15a.reading.whorethat was really cool. I especially liked the first bit where you talked about what it was like with dragons- I felt as if I was there. good job!
12/20/2003 c1 iamacheeto
Very nice! I personally enjoy the discriptions...
(I saw this on neopets, and myself am desprete for a review.)
-Alka
Very nice! I personally enjoy the discriptions...
(I saw this on neopets, and myself am desprete for a review.)
-Alka
12/20/2003 c4 2ConfectusPapilio
Its very nice, beautiful descriptions and stuff...
but its plotless...more like mindless ramblings about dragons...you need to add a plot and length
2ConfectusPapilioIts very nice, beautiful descriptions and stuff...
but its plotless...more like mindless ramblings about dragons...you need to add a plot and length
12/17/2003 c1 1Colombian-at-your-Service
hey, um I think u should put more feeling into this and make it longer. You have a beautiful way with words and fluent language though. Try writing a REAL summary too. Not to sound mean but you'll get a whole lot reviews if u do :)
Good luck!
1Colombian-at-your-Servicehey, um I think u should put more feeling into this and make it longer. You have a beautiful way with words and fluent language though. Try writing a REAL summary too. Not to sound mean but you'll get a whole lot reviews if u do :)
Good luck!
12/17/2003 c4 17Lady of romance world88
Your story is so short. Can you write more like dialect? There are no people in the story like what happens?
I hope u understand it.
17Lady of romance world88Your story is so short. Can you write more like dialect? There are no people in the story like what happens?
I hope u understand it.