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4/28/2004 c4 1Polezrael
As a dragon lover I must compliment you. You have done well, although I would put the four chapters into one chapter and draw out the part where the part where the old man reveiled to the boy the Dragon's Tear. You ended it rather beautifully, and over all, I really liked it.
~Ezrael Nhrive
1/3/2004 c4 15a.reading.whore
that was really cool. I especially liked the first bit where you talked about what it was like with dragons- I felt as if I was there. good job!
12/26/2003 c3 54Werecat99
Touching, although I think that the dragons' return came a bit too easily.
12/26/2003 c2 Werecat99
That was a good chapter too. Very vivid and realistic.
12/26/2003 c1 Werecat99
That was a beautiful prologue.
12/20/2003 c1 iamacheeto
Very nice! I personally enjoy the discriptions...
(I saw this on neopets, and myself am desprete for a review.)
12/20/2003 c4 2ConfectusPapilio
Its very nice, beautiful descriptions and stuff...
but its plotless...more like mindless ramblings about dragons...you need to add a plot and length
12/17/2003 c1 1Colombian-at-your-Service
hey, um I think u should put more feeling into this and make it longer. You have a beautiful way with words and fluent language though. Try writing a REAL summary too. Not to sound mean but you'll get a whole lot reviews if u do :)
Good luck!
12/17/2003 c4 17Lady of romance world88
Your story is so short. Can you write more like dialect? There are no people in the story like what happens?
I hope u understand it.
12/17/2003 c1 4Maeda
Very nice. I enjoyed it, and am looking forward to the rest! Although, I think you should go into a little more detail. Let people get to rally know the Dragons. Let them understand them
12/17/2003 c1 4Nathan K
2 short 4 me 2 review, can't tell if it's good or bad..make it longer

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