for Rebirth7/19/2009 c1 
1tonight we bloom
Okay, wow. I had tingles throughout the entire poem. Every line was filled with amazing words and amazing passion, and the ending was powerful and moving. I loved it.
I would love opinions on my work from a talented writer like yourself, it would really mean a lot.
1tonight we bloomOkay, wow. I had tingles throughout the entire poem. Every line was filled with amazing words and amazing passion, and the ending was powerful and moving. I loved it.
I would love opinions on my work from a talented writer like yourself, it would really mean a lot.
1/29/2004 c1 40SilverSpinner
Wow. Incredible... just incredible... visually, conceptually, emotionally... it's beautiful. I love it. (Please R+R "Never", if you'd be so kind.)
40SilverSpinnerWow. Incredible... just incredible... visually, conceptually, emotionally... it's beautiful. I love it. (Please R+R "Never", if you'd be so kind.)
12/18/2003 c1 55tranCendenZ
i dont really see it as a new perspective because thats what a lot of people think suicide is like...but you just wrote it so well taht it made it sound fresh and new...kudos...lots of kudos
55tranCendenZi dont really see it as a new perspective because thats what a lot of people think suicide is like...but you just wrote it so well taht it made it sound fresh and new...kudos...lots of kudos
12/17/2003 c1 12Rocky G
A very dark poem. I dont really know what to say. It is well written, and hold a lot of meaning. I like the contrast from the beging to the end.
12Rocky GA very dark poem. I dont really know what to say. It is well written, and hold a lot of meaning. I like the contrast from the beging to the end.
12/17/2003 c1 70Burning Moon
simply, purely, perfect . . . . . . . . . pls r'n'r "falling angel" and "crush[ed] heart", if you would?
"n thats the way the cookie crumbles"
70Burning Moonsimply, purely, perfect . . . . . . . . . pls r'n'r "falling angel" and "crush[ed] heart", if you would?
"n thats the way the cookie crumbles"
12/17/2003 c1 Lady Gerbil
"The World wouldn’t(couldn’t)Understand"~~How beautifully bitter-sweet.I love
"The World wouldn’t(couldn’t)Understand"~~How beautifully bitter-sweet.I love