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5/8/2005 c1 46Furine Panpasu Kitsuchi
Love sucks... because it can heart so much... truth is so preasious, giving yourself to ay one else can be the death of your soul... love it.
10/13/2004 c1 Soul of Night
Completely weird. Don't go with the love and loose. Tell them to go away. Never loose those closest to you. Good poem though.
6/5/2004 c1 9QuillKitten
Anaesthetic is my favorite poem ever, well on this site anyway... No flaw in that, but nowback on topic. Hurtful, kind od like the way ivy might snake about you and slowly bind you and relinquish you of air. It's really melancholy, and the tone is the main driving force in most of you're poems (I think.) This isn't your best, but as a poet you know that there is a lot of crap that you don't post and then your favorite and best. And this is just one of those poems that is good because it hits home. Painfully. Great job, as usually. And feel free to criticsize (sp?) anytime! Or bash it, lol. I'll return the favor.
12/18/2003 c1 5PainkillerPie
That's such a good poem... I can't fault it. *wipes away half formed tear*

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