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6/8/2004 c1 9QuillKitten
Yikes. I'm so glad I'm not that person. This is pure emotional energy, forceful, true, and unrestrained. I like your style, its the opposite of mine. But yours is so intense. That's the word I've been looking for INTENSE. All your poetry is powerfully intense. Love it all.
5/24/2004 c1 glashion
hey cam
this is so good
whenever i cant handle her anymore i read it, and it helps, knowing someone else sees it
thank you
3/17/2004 c1 335chainedfreedom
im never going to get on your bad side =)
its pure loath.
i can almost see the words turing white from heat and anger.
1/6/2004 c1 8cascades124
woah, very strong words you've got there... seems like you've poured all your emotions in this one. i just hope you and your friend would still turn out fine. you've got a way with words- very powerful it seem to cut through anything. however, just a suggestion... try to maintain an average measure for each line. it'll help improve the effect of the poem you're writing because there'll be some sort of consistency. keep up the good work! don't tire of writing... goddess bless!
12/22/2003 c1 1Osmondia
Nicely written, and I like the repetitive way this poem contains. Slightly dark.

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