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9/19/2005 c1 9QuillKitten
I haven't reviewed you in awhile, don't think you'll mind too much. I've always liked your work, it's like a bullet shooting from a rose beautiful and then violently cutting. Is this how from the time you are born you are wake-sleeping by being caught up in the media or the distortion of our lives? My favorite line, is "Join the inequity, the righteous within hypocracy" It suits our 'society' today. Oh, did you mean Rose in the seventh line, because I'm not sure if it works out to well. Grammatically I think, and the flow. Good luck, catch ya later.Kat
12/19/2003 c1 91TheresA-Pickle-InMyCookieJar
...interestin poem...

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