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1/15/2006 c1 Sapphire Spectrum
I really liked this poem, and I actually heard it in my head like a song. Truly beautiful, and going onto my faves!
4/12/2004 c1 147hiding behind amber eyes
aaw! seems so sad! ur work is awesome. keep writing
1/4/2004 c1 72Magnificent Moi
Beautiful. I love 'Fingertips callused to match a heart toughened by time -.-
12/20/2003 c1 21NatashaRostof
This whole thing is so original, and precise and _perfect_. How on earth you get what you're feeling on the page so beautifully is completely beyond me.
The stanza around and including "until" is my favorite. It all flows so well, and is such amazing imagery.
Beyond the poetry, I'm not sure where what you're expressing in this fits into the scheme of things, but I really, really hope you're all right. I love you.
12/19/2003 c1 17CrimsonSoulTears
That's brilliant. I like the You'll cry (I'll remember your eyes) bit. Probably the idea, but hey.

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