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1/14/2004 c1 Kit
The other people who have reviewed this are wrong. Your aren't "not half bad", your a fantastic writer. I hope that your not doomed to star-crossed loverdom. I hope that you find happiness, I selfishly hope its with me.
12/20/2003 c1 92Celestial Sailor
You're not half-bad? Nobody has seemed to realise how much of a paradox that is.
Um.. it's interesting, though not heavily substantial. I think you have many loose ends to patch up. On the other hand, your sustainment of ideas and viewpoints is at least fresh and consistent.
A favourite of the poem comes from the final stanza,
"Don't drink the poison, my love.
Can't you see I'm alive,
and waiting for your kiss?"
-Celestial Sailor
12/19/2003 c1 84Jaclyn
As per usual, you write *amazing* last verses. They have such power and grace...I'm speechless.
I love broken fairytales :)
12/19/2003 c1 12fyre-girl
I like this alot. It's really good. Keep it up, ur not half bad...
loves!
fyre-girl

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