for Break6/20/2012 c17 
13breakthehabit
OMG. I can't believe I was right! I suspected Violet. o_O I CAN'T BELIEVE IT.
13breakthehabitOMG. I can't believe I was right! I suspected Violet. o_O I CAN'T BELIEVE IT.
10/26/2011 c20 Cupid'sPsyche
I swear that from this very moment on, this is my favourite story! For the past one and a half hours you've had me hooked. And a few chapters back when Marvin was twitching every time Violet moved I knew something was up... but i never guessed it was this.
I know this was written a while back so yuur probably a lot better at writing then, but boy was that good.
Bravo for achieving such an intricate, gripping, amazing plot.
When i get access to my real acc. I won't be able to wait to add this story to my favourites. :D
I swear that from this very moment on, this is my favourite story! For the past one and a half hours you've had me hooked. And a few chapters back when Marvin was twitching every time Violet moved I knew something was up... but i never guessed it was this.
I know this was written a while back so yuur probably a lot better at writing then, but boy was that good.
Bravo for achieving such an intricate, gripping, amazing plot.
When i get access to my real acc. I won't be able to wait to add this story to my favourites. :D
4/28/2011 c21 Ederra
I absolutely love this!
I basically read the entire thing in one sitting...
The way you wove the romance and action aspects together was brilliant. The plot line was incredible - especially the twists (i.e. the whole Violet thing), and the characters were definitely unique.
So I realise that Break II is probably not happening... unfortunately :(
But nevertheless, this was an amazing story.
-Innocence
I absolutely love this!
I basically read the entire thing in one sitting...
The way you wove the romance and action aspects together was brilliant. The plot line was incredible - especially the twists (i.e. the whole Violet thing), and the characters were definitely unique.
So I realise that Break II is probably not happening... unfortunately :(
But nevertheless, this was an amazing story.
-Innocence
11/6/2010 c21 asiaalicexx
although im about six years late reviewing this story might as well tell you that i loved, loved, loved this story!
although im about six years late reviewing this story might as well tell you that i loved, loved, loved this story!
7/29/2010 c1 bookzealous
hey
I just read your A/N on your profile page about your apprehensions over Break II and i really feel you should continue and write it.
Break, I feel was a brillient piece of fiction and that could only happen if a writer has a deep connection with the characters and the story, and that seemed to come from you. So on that note, i really hope you do carry on with Break II if not now then at least sometime in the future.
Good Luck in whatever you will ultimatly decide, (though *fingers crossed* i hope this sway your decision towards the positive, at least a little)
hey
I just read your A/N on your profile page about your apprehensions over Break II and i really feel you should continue and write it.
Break, I feel was a brillient piece of fiction and that could only happen if a writer has a deep connection with the characters and the story, and that seemed to come from you. So on that note, i really hope you do carry on with Break II if not now then at least sometime in the future.
Good Luck in whatever you will ultimatly decide, (though *fingers crossed* i hope this sway your decision towards the positive, at least a little)
7/29/2010 c21 bookzealous
Hey! :D
I recently 'discovered' this story and WOW am i glad i did!
I think it was simply Extrodinairy , the action sequeces were mindblowingly brillient, the sizzling chemistry between the two itself was enough to keep anyone spellbound. It was a definate pageturner or in this case mouseclicker!
The plot I feel is better than those in some of the action films the come out today.
As for how you built-up the characters and dealt with their relationship Magnificent!
I can't wait for the sequal!
Good Luck! :D
Hey! :D
I recently 'discovered' this story and WOW am i glad i did!
I think it was simply Extrodinairy , the action sequeces were mindblowingly brillient, the sizzling chemistry between the two itself was enough to keep anyone spellbound. It was a definate pageturner or in this case mouseclicker!
The plot I feel is better than those in some of the action films the come out today.
As for how you built-up the characters and dealt with their relationship Magnificent!
I can't wait for the sequal!
Good Luck! :D
7/22/2010 c21 Missy
Wow, that was a really interestnig story! :D
I really liked it.
Wow, that was a really interestnig story! :D
I really liked it.
7/1/2010 c17 loveseekerXoX
HA I KNEW IT!
HA I KNEW IT!
6/30/2010 c10 loveseekerXoX
Betcha anything that Violet's the woman in his office and shes a traitor.
Betcha anything that Violet's the woman in his office and shes a traitor.
6/18/2010 c21 Ori Lee
You are a wonderful author. I absolutely love Carson and Sahara! You defintiely grabbed my attention; I actually stayed up so late last night reading this that I had to wait to review so that it wouldn't sound like gibberish. You did a great job with all the action scences and throughout the story you put a vivid picture in my head. So vivid that I had dreams about your story...Anyway, you did a wonderful job and I can't wait for Break II to come out :)
You are a wonderful author. I absolutely love Carson and Sahara! You defintiely grabbed my attention; I actually stayed up so late last night reading this that I had to wait to review so that it wouldn't sound like gibberish. You did a great job with all the action scences and throughout the story you put a vivid picture in my head. So vivid that I had dreams about your story...Anyway, you did a wonderful job and I can't wait for Break II to come out :)
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5/14/2010 c20 10balloonfista
just read this again and there are no words for how much I love it.
seriously.
Ri
10balloonfistajust read this again and there are no words for how much I love it.
seriously.
Ri