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7/26/2009 c6 3sanitary pad
Hahaha. Violet and the connecting door. I keep laughing at that part. Awesome.
7/25/2009 c5 sanitary pad
7/25/2009 c3 sanitary pad
Great ending. I loved the way you described Viviane. Made me dislike her at once. Haha.
7/25/2009 c2 sanitary pad
Haha. Victoria's Secret model. Hahahah!

I like Mattie. Great chapter.
7/25/2009 c1 sanitary pad
Fantastic start.

I can honestly say that this chapter reeled me in instantly. I have so many questions.. But I shall continue reading :D
7/10/2009 c21 1SmearedRedTearDrops
I love this story's plot! I definately wasn't expecting Violet to be the bad guy! And i really enjoyed your characters ... who would thought, pink and fluffiness for the ice queen :P
6/25/2009 c21 reader
I adore this story. You are an incredibly talented author; I can't believe I found you on Fictionpress. I really cannot wait to read other things you've written. :)
6/25/2009 c18 readre
Oh, *multiple curse words* what if he kills Sahara in the explosion?

Wow, Violet, I canNOT believe it.

And Sahara and Carson are SO hardcore.

Your description and writing is stellar. The plot is really breath-catching, too.
6/25/2009 c17 reader
WAIT, what the F * C K, are you KIDDING me, OMG, I definitely did NOT see this coming, I will be so absoLUTEly disappointed if Carson and Sahara die and Violet gets away; in fact, I'd be totally disGUSted. HOLY EFFING MOTHER OF JESUS!

What a twist!

WHAT a twist!
6/25/2009 c16 reader
Ripping out stray hairs? Haha, great attention to detail.

Oh yeah, and I was going to say that the explanation for why Sahara has a deep hatred for weak men was really well done in the last chapter.

Btw, I haven't heard from Viviane at all since she was drugged?
6/25/2009 c15 reader
This is not related to the chapter exactly, but I love how Sahara is such a thoroughly good person.

Marvin.. :P
6/25/2009 c14 reader
This is the most intense, hardcore, believable, wonderful romance story ever.
6/25/2009 c13 reader
6/25/2009 c12 reader
I'm glad Carson is such a good guy/ Viviane is so repellent. hah.
6/25/2009 c8 reader
Love the balance of dialogue and description.
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