for Dearest Ilene1/26/2004 c1 
40Jareth the Monk
You know you can't say anything bad about tributes even if you were to find fault in the writing style (that's more a matter of personal taste than a problem with the storyline itself). Writing is good to express what someone means to you, but even better is when they know while they're still with us. Maybe a day will come when posthumous accolades will be mere dressing to punctuate how we feel about those around us because there will no longer be any misunderstandings, arguments, or utter silence, and no more ex-lovers, strangers, or outcasts.
40Jareth the MonkYou know you can't say anything bad about tributes even if you were to find fault in the writing style (that's more a matter of personal taste than a problem with the storyline itself). Writing is good to express what someone means to you, but even better is when they know while they're still with us. Maybe a day will come when posthumous accolades will be mere dressing to punctuate how we feel about those around us because there will no longer be any misunderstandings, arguments, or utter silence, and no more ex-lovers, strangers, or outcasts.
1/3/2004 c1 ThorinOakenshiel
OK, I couldn't log in, but I'm the one who wrote diary of a dumb girl. thanks for the review! and for your poem, it reminded me of a time when a swimmer from a different club wrote a "poem" for one of our trainers and it sounded a bit like that. But I liked the mold part, it was cool. you're a very good writer, continue! (as we say in french)
OK, I couldn't log in, but I'm the one who wrote diary of a dumb girl. thanks for the review! and for your poem, it reminded me of a time when a swimmer from a different club wrote a "poem" for one of our trainers and it sounded a bit like that. But I liked the mold part, it was cool. you're a very good writer, continue! (as we say in french)
12/23/2003 c1 41Razor Sharp Kisses
Rather than writing about the bad/sad, you wrote about the good, and that's what makes this poem so heartfelt. I like this one, as well.
41Razor Sharp KissesRather than writing about the bad/sad, you wrote about the good, and that's what makes this poem so heartfelt. I like this one, as well.