for Ugly6/5/2004 c1 
18Mimi Meow
ikno how u feel...thanx for that poem can i put it one my poetry wall? (i meant thanx for writing and posting it its beautiful!)
18Mimi Meowikno how u feel...thanx for that poem can i put it one my poetry wall? (i meant thanx for writing and posting it its beautiful!)
3/26/2004 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
Oh. Damn. . .
"I try to be myself
It only gets you somewhere
When yourself is good"
Brilliant and incredibly true lines.
I know this feeling, so this really hit home. Well-written, good descriptions, though a few lines didn't quite fit. I still adore it. . .why is self-esteem so hard to have? It just never seems worth it.
-Jessica
123breakdown in the waiting roomOh. Damn. . .
"I try to be myself
It only gets you somewhere
When yourself is good"
Brilliant and incredibly true lines.
I know this feeling, so this really hit home. Well-written, good descriptions, though a few lines didn't quite fit. I still adore it. . .why is self-esteem so hard to have? It just never seems worth it.
-Jessica
3/3/2004 c1 77Vlaadimir
The last two stanzas were most powerful, which was good, because it seems like the whole poem led up to that part. Those two stanzas were my favorite part.
I can relate to this. I don't like the way I look, either.
This is such an awesome poem.
77VlaadimirThe last two stanzas were most powerful, which was good, because it seems like the whole poem led up to that part. Those two stanzas were my favorite part.
I can relate to this. I don't like the way I look, either.
This is such an awesome poem.
1/7/2004 c1 55tranCendenZ
yah...i dont like the "don't got no problems"...makes you sound like a moron..unless that was your intention...i think this is more about helplessness though...it makes me feel like you know or think you know what you are and there's nothing you can do besides lay down and die...you shouldnt feel that way..you are a poet...you keep a beautiful artform alive...just remember that
55tranCendenZyah...i dont like the "don't got no problems"...makes you sound like a moron..unless that was your intention...i think this is more about helplessness though...it makes me feel like you know or think you know what you are and there's nothing you can do besides lay down and die...you shouldnt feel that way..you are a poet...you keep a beautiful artform alive...just remember that
12/20/2003 c1 45flowerthief
Wow. You have really strong oppinions don't you? The human race should die? Well, I'm not going to say I've never thought that, but my actually words were "I want the world the split in half and have everyone fell inside to meet their flaming demise." I think we have somethings in common. We should take...Back to the poem. Pretending I don't got no problems. If that line was revised I think the poem would have a better flow. I agree with you on most of it. And yea, good poem.
AC
45flowerthiefWow. You have really strong oppinions don't you? The human race should die? Well, I'm not going to say I've never thought that, but my actually words were "I want the world the split in half and have everyone fell inside to meet their flaming demise." I think we have somethings in common. We should take...Back to the poem. Pretending I don't got no problems. If that line was revised I think the poem would have a better flow. I agree with you on most of it. And yea, good poem.
AC