for Verin1/17/2004 c2 
2elf kirianna
guess what... I want more... what'll happen when Vlos finds out AH poor sTeve Verin needs to tell him
Kiri
2elf kiriannaguess what... I want more... what'll happen when Vlos finds out AH poor sTeve Verin needs to tell him
Kiri
1/4/2004 c2 10Malicious Scars
Very good story you have going on here..i really like the name verin too.Write more!
10Malicious ScarsVery good story you have going on here..i really like the name verin too.Write more!
12/25/2003 c2 Smile101
Wow. That was a good chapter. I feel sorry for him though because of his father. Update soon. Thanks.
Wow. That was a good chapter. I feel sorry for him though because of his father. Update soon. Thanks.
12/25/2003 c2 The Cute Little One
Great. I feel happy for Verin that he has a friend like Steve. I hope Verin and his Mom get away from that evil father. well cant wait for more :)
~Max
Great. I feel happy for Verin that he has a friend like Steve. I hope Verin and his Mom get away from that evil father. well cant wait for more :)
~Max
12/21/2003 c1 The Cute Little One
aw i feel bad for the Verin to go through stuff like that. i would have tried to run away prbly. I hope he and his mom get away.
~Max
aw i feel bad for the Verin to go through stuff like that. i would have tried to run away prbly. I hope he and his mom get away.
~Max
12/21/2003 c1 Smile101
his father is disgusting. you write very good. Update soon. can you update "First Taste" as well?
his father is disgusting. you write very good. Update soon. can you update "First Taste" as well?