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12/21/2003 c1 73Eibhinn Eonach
very artsy and poetic. I liked it a lot. the only thing that seemed a little funny was the comma between the "she was" and the various things that came after it. I assume there was a purpose for that, though, and why disturb and artists vision? lol. Very nice work.
Eibhinn
12/21/2003 c1 17fontanellemonster
Wow...you're a beautiful writer. It was lovely, something you had to read a coupl of times over to really appreciate and understand it. Beautiful..

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