for Concept for a Dream1/13/2004 c1 
31Cindy Moon
A very laudable story. I enjoyed the character's story. So she made mistakes, she's having a baby, but she's not having an abortion. This is a winner. -^^-
-Cindy Moon *)
31Cindy MoonA very laudable story. I enjoyed the character's story. So she made mistakes, she's having a baby, but she's not having an abortion. This is a winner. -^^-
-Cindy Moon *)
1/4/2004 c1 23chocolatecreme06
I think this is a great story and I love the fact that you chose the name concept for a dream. For some reason that alone made the story appealing enough to take a look at. I also like your last line ‘ as we embrace, I have another missing piece for my puzzle of life.’ I think it’s a nice analogy.Then your situation is interesting. Here Lavina is pregnant and about to kill her former best friend and somehow it has renewed their friendship. I also like how detailed you are. It lets us envision everything better. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
~Chocolatecreme06
23chocolatecreme06I think this is a great story and I love the fact that you chose the name concept for a dream. For some reason that alone made the story appealing enough to take a look at. I also like your last line ‘ as we embrace, I have another missing piece for my puzzle of life.’ I think it’s a nice analogy.Then your situation is interesting. Here Lavina is pregnant and about to kill her former best friend and somehow it has renewed their friendship. I also like how detailed you are. It lets us envision everything better. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
~Chocolatecreme06