for Staying Alone1/20/2004 c1 
7TC Stark
*claps* Very good first chapoter! I like the concept! Ya know, not enough is given to those Russian people, though I can't say much seeing I'm all Italian. Anyway and you splet Arigato fine. I am the master of languages! I know Italian, English, French, German, and Japanese! So you can always come to me if your in a jam! Ok, next chapter!
7TC Stark*claps* Very good first chapoter! I like the concept! Ya know, not enough is given to those Russian people, though I can't say much seeing I'm all Italian. Anyway and you splet Arigato fine. I am the master of languages! I know Italian, English, French, German, and Japanese! So you can always come to me if your in a jam! Ok, next chapter!
1/18/2004 c3 Leona
Good story! I can't wait for an update! I read the other reviews and I agree you should make her tougher! lol but that's just what I think!
Good story! I can't wait for an update! I read the other reviews and I agree you should make her tougher! lol but that's just what I think!
12/23/2003 c2 8The Fan Dancer
Damn the law, it's good for nothing but trouble. By the way, when does this story occur? I may have missed the date, but to my knowledge japan is hardly the place where poverty rules. Maybe after the 2nd WW
8The Fan DancerDamn the law, it's good for nothing but trouble. By the way, when does this story occur? I may have missed the date, but to my knowledge japan is hardly the place where poverty rules. Maybe after the 2nd WW
12/23/2003 c1 The Fan Dancer
I like it so far, but maybe you ought to make her tougher. After all, she needs her strenght when she meets the cold, yet cool stranger!
I like it so far, but maybe you ought to make her tougher. After all, she needs her strenght when she meets the cold, yet cool stranger!