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1/2/2006 c1 33Tenebrific
I met a bum once, he asked me how I would like it if everyone pretended I didn't exist
7/17/2005 c1 145transparency93
wow.. again, i really enjoyed reading that. well done. awesomely written. :D
12/21/2004 c1 alice
it's so lovely... and touching. and fabulous. and you're not just throwing the facts on the table its nicely presented. i love it.
12/15/2004 c1 Mo
whoa...your so good at this Mary...its unbeleivable. im supposed to be studing for those exams though...i like reading your poems better...they are bish.-caitlin
8/14/2004 c1 2Joseph Corey LeJuine
Another good one!I love your poems!how do you think of this stuff?
6/26/2004 c1 14opaline
A nice poem. You put the message across in a wonderful way, using simple yet personal details of the man. Keep writing!
1/26/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
very sad.. cool rhyming.. i liek the ending.. altho i dont really get why he turned out like that...
thanks for the review! im sorry you dont like simple plan and i dont like ruby bridges.. she came to my school and she was actually really mean... i wrote those poems before i met her
1/25/2004 c1 12kalariah
Incredibly sad, but true, how our country so quickly forgets our heroes. This has a lot of emotion in it; I really like the way you've put it together-the shame of being a bum on the streets, and yet the lingering remnants of old pride, for what he used to be.
Thanks for your awesome reviews of my poems, too; I really appreciate that!
1/1/2004 c1 1awillingcadaver
Cool, very cool. Um, I don't know what to say...oh well.
Lyz

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