for Redundant Recovery1/8/2004 c1 
8MoonBlues
A beautiful poem, a very very nice piece.
And, I know this is off topic, but I just have to say it.
Your pen name is so beautiful! I wish that was my IRL name. It's such a perfect name for an author. Hehe.
Anyway.
Keep up the good writing.
~Kim
8MoonBluesA beautiful poem, a very very nice piece.
And, I know this is off topic, but I just have to say it.
Your pen name is so beautiful! I wish that was my IRL name. It's such a perfect name for an author. Hehe.
Anyway.
Keep up the good writing.
~Kim
1/4/2004 c1 102firemounrain
I really like this poem, especially the first two stanzas. I happen to be addicted to writing and reading... I just got back from a ski trip, it was absolutely wonderful. By the way, thankye for the review a while ago.
-mi
102firemounrainI really like this poem, especially the first two stanzas. I happen to be addicted to writing and reading... I just got back from a ski trip, it was absolutely wonderful. By the way, thankye for the review a while ago.
-mi
12/26/2003 c1 121Seeker of the Way
wow! This is so very nice! In a way, this is what I have been trying to say. i like the bringing together of opposites.
I saw a nice review of yours over at Infinite Smiles. She is fun to Im. I have found a lot of nice people to talk to here. You can IM me, if you'd like. I love meeting new people! If oyu are not sure (becasue of my lamo profile adn photo that makes me look bald), check out my poetry, or ask Infinite Smiles about me!
Anyway, I hope you had a nice holiday!
I really liked the way you expressed yourslef here. I hope to see more of your works soon!
121Seeker of the Waywow! This is so very nice! In a way, this is what I have been trying to say. i like the bringing together of opposites.
I saw a nice review of yours over at Infinite Smiles. She is fun to Im. I have found a lot of nice people to talk to here. You can IM me, if you'd like. I love meeting new people! If oyu are not sure (becasue of my lamo profile adn photo that makes me look bald), check out my poetry, or ask Infinite Smiles about me!
Anyway, I hope you had a nice holiday!
I really liked the way you expressed yourslef here. I hope to see more of your works soon!
12/23/2003 c1 S. Spark
Wow...I really like the imagery here. Even a little bit of optimism seems to be hidden amidst all of it...nice job.
Wow...I really like the imagery here. Even a little bit of optimism seems to be hidden amidst all of it...nice job.
12/23/2003 c1 144Infinite Smiles
I like tha language and the whole concept of it. My favorite line is the following, because I like the imagery that it provides:this sea is syrup and devours my skin- beautiful
144Infinite SmilesI like tha language and the whole concept of it. My favorite line is the following, because I like the imagery that it provides:this sea is syrup and devours my skin- beautiful