for Captive1/13/2012 c6 dncbrules
Mon Dieu... 2004? please post new chapters! it's 2012 and this story ain't finished yet!
Mon Dieu... 2004? please post new chapters! it's 2012 and this story ain't finished yet!
7/16/2008 c1 
12Edalene Athene
Very good start, only problem, you have used 'comte', maybe you were aiming for 'conte'? As far as I know, they were actually counts in England. Also the name sounds french so... If I am wrong, pls feel free to correct me.
12Edalene AtheneVery good start, only problem, you have used 'comte', maybe you were aiming for 'conte'? As far as I know, they were actually counts in England. Also the name sounds french so... If I am wrong, pls feel free to correct me.
2/10/2007 c6 2Once upon a smile
Ever gunna update? It's a shame to let a story as amazing as this just float.. Or at least take it down so when I forget to look at update date I don't get hooked then feel like crying when it's one of those dead stories! It's so good. I just want more.. PLEASE
2Once upon a smileEver gunna update? It's a shame to let a story as amazing as this just float.. Or at least take it down so when I forget to look at update date I don't get hooked then feel like crying when it's one of those dead stories! It's so good. I just want more.. PLEASE
9/6/2005 c6 Evenstar
OMGOSH. I am in love with your story! Please oh PLEASE update! It says on the site that you haven't updated in over a year.. please come back! This story is so good. =D
OMGOSH. I am in love with your story! Please oh PLEASE update! It says on the site that you haven't updated in over a year.. please come back! This story is so good. =D
7/1/2005 c6 8Tomoe Gozen
Granted you write with all the forcefulness of Wilbur Smith and all of the wit of Jane Austen, but your plot and characters are inherently your own.
A damn fine job you did as well. I am certain that I speak for all of your readers when I say that your voice (and Lady Stanhope's and Lord Wellesley's for that matter) is inordinately strong for an author of this humble forum. I can feel for Aidenn and dislike and like Philip at the same time.
I cannot wait until the Sheik is introduced. I am hoping he is as illuminating and vivid character as the others. I also favor a romantic liasion between such a prospectively exotic, dashing, and dark man with Aidenn.
Again, well done. Cheers!
8Tomoe GozenGranted you write with all the forcefulness of Wilbur Smith and all of the wit of Jane Austen, but your plot and characters are inherently your own.
A damn fine job you did as well. I am certain that I speak for all of your readers when I say that your voice (and Lady Stanhope's and Lord Wellesley's for that matter) is inordinately strong for an author of this humble forum. I can feel for Aidenn and dislike and like Philip at the same time.
I cannot wait until the Sheik is introduced. I am hoping he is as illuminating and vivid character as the others. I also favor a romantic liasion between such a prospectively exotic, dashing, and dark man with Aidenn.
Again, well done. Cheers!
6/30/2005 c6 Dawn
Ditto. Look forward to the next chapters (soon?).
Ditto. Look forward to the next chapters (soon?).
5/18/2005 c6 1Mariposa Traicionera
It is clear that you have made an impression on many readers with your story and impressive writng, i myself am quite taken with it. However many seem eager for you to update maybe you could acknowledge your fans and acredit them with another sizzling chapter to quench their thirsts.
1Mariposa TraicioneraIt is clear that you have made an impression on many readers with your story and impressive writng, i myself am quite taken with it. However many seem eager for you to update maybe you could acknowledge your fans and acredit them with another sizzling chapter to quench their thirsts.
5/12/2005 c6 Pandemica
OHMYGOD! You have to continue! I am going to be pacing in frustration and anxiety until I can read what happens next.
OHMYGOD! You have to continue! I am going to be pacing in frustration and anxiety until I can read what happens next.
3/20/2005 c6 1JacqlynXOXO
WOW! Phillipe is such an ass hole! but im sure hes warm and kind deep down :) right?
1JacqlynXOXOWOW! Phillipe is such an ass hole! but im sure hes warm and kind deep down :) right?
3/20/2005 c5 JacqlynXOXO
Awsome chapt. that was cool how you put forign languages in there. i know french but not latin. that was creative.
Awsome chapt. that was cool how you put forign languages in there. i know french but not latin. that was creative.