for A country Christmas2/10/2005 c6 
5Naja Copperleaf
I haven't been on fictionpress in a while, but I really liked this. I'm a little annoyed that Halley is passing up the country life for Seattle (mostly because I've always wanted to live on a farm.) But maybe in future chapters... Anyway, I thought that this was written really well. Shawn's persistence in the face of Halley's anger is admirable. Really good. ;)
5Naja CopperleafI haven't been on fictionpress in a while, but I really liked this. I'm a little annoyed that Halley is passing up the country life for Seattle (mostly because I've always wanted to live on a farm.) But maybe in future chapters... Anyway, I thought that this was written really well. Shawn's persistence in the face of Halley's anger is admirable. Really good. ;)
12/1/2004 c16 2NomadicWriter
I LOVED your story! it was Fantastic ^_^ now you need to do another epilogue when there married with kids hehe i just want more, more, more! Im going to go read your other stories now lol..-Kate
2NomadicWriterI LOVED your story! it was Fantastic ^_^ now you need to do another epilogue when there married with kids hehe i just want more, more, more! Im going to go read your other stories now lol..-Kate
11/10/2004 c16 Grrinning Golden Retriever
Hi! I don't often review, but I enjoyed your story- and you mentioned my home town, Walla Walla! Neat...
Thanks
Hi! I don't often review, but I enjoyed your story- and you mentioned my home town, Walla Walla! Neat...
Thanks
6/14/2004 c16 raine0211
LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY. I'm sorry its over. the only thing was that you coulda built up shawns reaction a bit more. but other than that! next story girl. you're definitely on a roll! ~Lisa~
LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY. I'm sorry its over. the only thing was that you coulda built up shawns reaction a bit more. but other than that! next story girl. you're definitely on a roll! ~Lisa~
6/14/2004 c8 Raine0211
I'm back and reviewing. Don't think I've forgotten about you. I'm loving this story and sorry I haven't been here pumping you up. I just started getting back into fp and even writing my stories! So here's my cheerleading support. As always your writing is clear and straightforwards and i love it. ~Lisa~
I'm back and reviewing. Don't think I've forgotten about you. I'm loving this story and sorry I haven't been here pumping you up. I just started getting back into fp and even writing my stories! So here's my cheerleading support. As always your writing is clear and straightforwards and i love it. ~Lisa~
6/1/2004 c16 28fallenone87
hey, i really really loved your writing. the style is just amazingly perfect and comprehensible.. i'm really impressed though there was something i felt wasn't enough.. u know the part where halley finds out the truth? i sort of didn't get the feeling out of it.. i don't know, maybe that chapt in shawn's POV would have worked better.. cuz i still had the idea that halley was the victim even after the explanation.. but other than that.. cool stuff! =)
28fallenone87hey, i really really loved your writing. the style is just amazingly perfect and comprehensible.. i'm really impressed though there was something i felt wasn't enough.. u know the part where halley finds out the truth? i sort of didn't get the feeling out of it.. i don't know, maybe that chapt in shawn's POV would have worked better.. cuz i still had the idea that halley was the victim even after the explanation.. but other than that.. cool stuff! =)
5/25/2004 c16 18Alexiana
Did I mention that I like your writing? First, I like your descriptions. I like how one feels like they truley understand her even if they don't and I think that you give enough scenery type ones to move the story along smoothly. Your characters are believable which is hard and I think that your diction puts you in a class above most. So, great story!
18AlexianaDid I mention that I like your writing? First, I like your descriptions. I like how one feels like they truley understand her even if they don't and I think that you give enough scenery type ones to move the story along smoothly. Your characters are believable which is hard and I think that your diction puts you in a class above most. So, great story!
5/22/2004 c16 passion101
ok, I just wanna say that this story ROCKED! It's been awhile since I've been so anxious to read a story:) It's been my dream to be a cowgirl, knowing everything about country life and being able to ride a horse like a pro. I guess I could relate to this story in a way. It was just classic and I loved it! I hope to see more stories like this from u:)
ok, I just wanna say that this story ROCKED! It's been awhile since I've been so anxious to read a story:) It's been my dream to be a cowgirl, knowing everything about country life and being able to ride a horse like a pro. I guess I could relate to this story in a way. It was just classic and I loved it! I hope to see more stories like this from u:)
5/22/2004 c16 darkness falls
BRAVO, applause, applause
BRAVO, applause, applause
5/21/2004 c16 16Aurora Dusk
hi! i just loved that! u have great talent. at first i thought it might seem like Sweet Home Alabama but it wasn't and i liked how u used ur knowledge bout stuff to make the story interesting. it really was great and i can't wait to read future stuff!
16Aurora Duskhi! i just loved that! u have great talent. at first i thought it might seem like Sweet Home Alabama but it wasn't and i liked how u used ur knowledge bout stuff to make the story interesting. it really was great and i can't wait to read future stuff!
5/21/2004 c16 2Angelic Eden
Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. Nice epilogue. Can't wait to read your other stories. Congrats and great job with this fic.
2Angelic EdenWonderful, absolutely wonderful. Nice epilogue. Can't wait to read your other stories. Congrats and great job with this fic.
5/21/2004 c16 5Dez Tiny
It's Ti.. *tear* its over. email me when you start a new one! i still need to read all of ur other stories.. i read Love Is Blind.. O yeah, and i need to read those stories that you recommended to me. Tell me when you start your new one. And could you please review my poem? thanx...
-THE RANDOM CRITIC-
5Dez TinyIt's Ti.. *tear* its over. email me when you start a new one! i still need to read all of ur other stories.. i read Love Is Blind.. O yeah, and i need to read those stories that you recommended to me. Tell me when you start your new one. And could you please review my poem? thanx...
-THE RANDOM CRITIC-