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9/11/2004 c4 Holly
OMG! I LOVED IT! THAT WAS SO GOOD! Pretty angsty and dark but really interesting, so it didn't matter. Plus, it kind of brightened up (kind of) in the end. Excellent!
3/25/2004 c4 Feather of Julia
I'm listening to the radio, and a song with these lyrics:
"I'm with you
I'm with you
Why is everything so confusing?"
I don't know the title, but it adds more drama to the story. It's so sad! I cried, I really did. Friends trust friends.
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I probably should've never read this story.
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Julia.
Love and Hate.
3/25/2004 c3 Feather of Julia
OMG! You write such painful stories! So sad. I don't want Shari to die. I hope she has a happy life before she dies, though. (sniffs; whipes away a tear)
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Julia.
3/25/2004 c2 Feather of Julia
(cries) That's so sad. He loves her, but I couldn't love someone who did that to me! But it's so sad. Yeah, if only she knew.
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I feel so sorry for Shari. Half-vampire is COOL! Hihih. (laughs; smiles slyly) Why am I smiling?
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Julia.
:P
3/25/2004 c1 Feather of Julia
(sniffs) Shari's life is horrible, but I want to be a vampire, too! (looks hopefully) But then again, blood is way too disgusting.
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Who's this narrator? Christ... I'll keep that in mind.
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Also, I've read the chapter titles and is sorry when Shari has to die.
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Julia.
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P.S. I read this earlier, but the review wasn't able to be submitted. I'm glad you didn't delete this story!

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