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10/11/2004 c1 12restless-wandering
~claps~ Great flow, except the second verse seemed a little bumpy... Awesome word choice though it really paints a picture (yeah, cliche, i know). The repetition in the last verse is really nice too :) Awesome work ~two thumbs up~
8/1/2004 c1 nick-wordsmith
Just beoynd your field of vision (or hearing...) Well done
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Stones decay, words last
Nick
2/13/2004 c1 74laughter at the funeral
...that seems to ba a new but an effective format for a poem for me...good job!...i like poems with reminiscent themes...oha nd if you have the time...pls r/r my works...
1/5/2004 c1 17ConfuseDAngel
another new structure you created. nice work to n erhem i mean master...hehe just kidding aside and looki at the date, so this is what you did on christmas eve... anyways, you connected the first and second stanzas why no the 3rd and the last part but well er it's your poem.. whatever. ^^
12/29/2003 c1 167PrincesKatrina
I really like the structure of this poem. I think it's good how the first to stanzas come back in the fourth and fit together, but can the third one tie back in for a momnet too? great poem
12/24/2003 c1 53Lidless Eye
Wow, this was very neat... I loved it... keep on writing!
~Lidless Eye
12/24/2003 c1 77JustForgetMe
This is an interesting and really good poem.keep writing!

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