5/8/2005 c7 3Green Inkblot
Ok, wow, You definitely need more reviews for this story because it is UNBELIEVABLY AWESOME! Oh my goodness, I love this idea for a story. It's perfect. The only thing that I would suggest is that you add an epilouge, to let us know what happens next. Yet also, if you did, that might take away from the suspenseful ending, which I think works well too! So either way! GREAT JOB! I can't wait to read your other writings!
Ok, wow, You definitely need more reviews for this story because it is UNBELIEVABLY AWESOME! Oh my goodness, I love this idea for a story. It's perfect. The only thing that I would suggest is that you add an epilouge, to let us know what happens next. Yet also, if you did, that might take away from the suspenseful ending, which I think works well too! So either way! GREAT JOB! I can't wait to read your other writings!
12/26/2003 c7 tensai
Why on earth did you suddenly write so many stories in one go? Grr...just joking!
Why on earth did you suddenly write so many stories in one go? Grr...just joking!
12/26/2003 c8 tensai
Heehee...it looks very profound...but frankly speaking, I dont understand a thing...heehee.
Heehee...it looks very profound...but frankly speaking, I dont understand a thing...heehee.
12/25/2003 c8 4wheezin
why did you have to make it sad? It's good, but really sad. Is it really the end? Dang it. but that whole thing with emma having a liking towards him was a bit overdone though. Is everybody asian or something? If darcy is asian, that's cute. Too bad only two people commented on this story. I liked the elegant style in which you wrote it with. Do you read classic books, by any chance? Write some more please!
why did you have to make it sad? It's good, but really sad. Is it really the end? Dang it. but that whole thing with emma having a liking towards him was a bit overdone though. Is everybody asian or something? If darcy is asian, that's cute. Too bad only two people commented on this story. I liked the elegant style in which you wrote it with. Do you read classic books, by any chance? Write some more please!
12/25/2003 c8 Rowan Waiftree
It's a shame that no one else has commented on this story. It was awesome, especially with the evident passion for music the main characters have.
It's a shame that no one else has commented on this story. It was awesome, especially with the evident passion for music the main characters have.
12/25/2003 c8 1SweetieOFChrisL
Bravo! Encore! (haha, since your story's about playing in concerts & all that)...*crickets chirping*
OK,never mind, but truly, i luv your story. It was so sad, but it's a cliffhanger! cliffhangers make me so frustrated! i just HAVE to know what happens at the end. does she die? that's what i think, but i dunno...
it was charming & sad at the same time. i feel so bad for Darcy.
By the way, since they're all asian & all, does this story take place in asia & what time period is it?
also, definitely more ppl should review. this is one of the best stories i've ever read ^ _ ^
~Jenn
Bravo! Encore! (haha, since your story's about playing in concerts & all that)...*crickets chirping*
OK,never mind, but truly, i luv your story. It was so sad, but it's a cliffhanger! cliffhangers make me so frustrated! i just HAVE to know what happens at the end. does she die? that's what i think, but i dunno...
it was charming & sad at the same time. i feel so bad for Darcy.
By the way, since they're all asian & all, does this story take place in asia & what time period is it?
also, definitely more ppl should review. this is one of the best stories i've ever read ^ _ ^
~Jenn