for Detached3/8/2004 c1 
2In Memoriam
I feel the grief in this poem - evoking sympathy in your reader's can only be a good thing. The last verse is particularly striking, and you end your poem with a very memorable image. I enjoyed reading this poem, in spite of its sad tone. keep up the good work
2In MemoriamI feel the grief in this poem - evoking sympathy in your reader's can only be a good thing. The last verse is particularly striking, and you end your poem with a very memorable image. I enjoyed reading this poem, in spite of its sad tone. keep up the good work
1/2/2004 c1 The Black Rider
Extremely well-written and quite cathartic as well. You are so good at ending your poems.
Extremely well-written and quite cathartic as well. You are so good at ending your poems.
12/26/2003 c1 Ravia
very nice
very nice
12/25/2003 c1 1l'orage d'absinthe
nice poem. i can connect to it and your choice of wordS was admirable.
1l'orage d'absinthenice poem. i can connect to it and your choice of wordS was admirable.