for Spare Me1/12/2008 c1 modernrobinhood
this is really good..i love it
this is really good..i love it
9/8/2007 c1 fullfilledmission
je suis liking this poem very very much! This is such a totally true tribute to how i feel about the concept of teenage "love" that its crazy the parallels i can draw between your thinking an mine ...not to mention the rest of the people who reviewed this poem. I don't think I've ever seen this many reviews on a single poem. Congrats. Well deserved.
je suis liking this poem very very much! This is such a totally true tribute to how i feel about the concept of teenage "love" that its crazy the parallels i can draw between your thinking an mine ...not to mention the rest of the people who reviewed this poem. I don't think I've ever seen this many reviews on a single poem. Congrats. Well deserved.
3/7/2007 c1 
5Scribbled Ink
I am so favoriting this...
This is my nearly my exact opinion. Why do they have to GUSH and chatter away about something they won't care about in a few days?
5Scribbled InkI am so favoriting this...
This is my nearly my exact opinion. Why do they have to GUSH and chatter away about something they won't care about in a few days?
8/26/2006 c1 1Amber Rhodes
wow... this is like me when i hear my friends go like... OH WOW LOOK AT THAT GUY...
i roll my eyes and sigh... I really relate to this poem it's funny
1Amber Rhodeswow... this is like me when i hear my friends go like... OH WOW LOOK AT THAT GUY...
i roll my eyes and sigh... I really relate to this poem it's funny
6/4/2006 c1 Peaches
Witty and true of 99% of relationships these days. I mean, one can still act like a total idiot and really be in love and not just with the idea of love, or it might start as being in love with love and then finding that the person really does matter that much, but those are few and far between. Overall, you covered the whole affair (har har) dead on.
I love it, and I especially admire that you're able to rhyme poetry and do so well!
Witty and true of 99% of relationships these days. I mean, one can still act like a total idiot and really be in love and not just with the idea of love, or it might start as being in love with love and then finding that the person really does matter that much, but those are few and far between. Overall, you covered the whole affair (har har) dead on.
I love it, and I especially admire that you're able to rhyme poetry and do so well!
3/7/2006 c1 7J. S. Lansing
It's got a lovely rhythm and a hilarious message. It's true. Most are in love with the idea of love.
Infatuation, adoration, that gimmering slobbery "love" that infects many is really slightly irritating. Thanks for expressing that in this.
-Emelie
"Gravitation is not the cause of people falling in love." -Albert Einstein
7J. S. LansingIt's got a lovely rhythm and a hilarious message. It's true. Most are in love with the idea of love.
Infatuation, adoration, that gimmering slobbery "love" that infects many is really slightly irritating. Thanks for expressing that in this.
-Emelie
"Gravitation is not the cause of people falling in love." -Albert Einstein
3/15/2005 c1 85grim-dreamer
Marvellous opening, admirable sarcasm and sensible point of view. People are just obsessed with each other, and the each other of each other, which brings me to wonder... Which each other fends off this problem? Not quite sure the last line of the opening stanza needs 'above' mentioned, as we all know where the heavens are... (unless we be Satanists or something).
85grim-dreamerMarvellous opening, admirable sarcasm and sensible point of view. People are just obsessed with each other, and the each other of each other, which brings me to wonder... Which each other fends off this problem? Not quite sure the last line of the opening stanza needs 'above' mentioned, as we all know where the heavens are... (unless we be Satanists or something).
1/30/2005 c1 Lalaith haven't actually joined yet
To true, to true... though I admit that I've been guilty of falling in "love" on more than one occasion... pity this only seems reasonable when I'm in my right mind...
kudos to you!
To true, to true... though I admit that I've been guilty of falling in "love" on more than one occasion... pity this only seems reasonable when I'm in my right mind...
kudos to you!
10/14/2004 c1 7Salt and Vinegar Pringles
Wow, I love the poem. I can relate. It's terrific. Good job!
7Salt and Vinegar PringlesWow, I love the poem. I can relate. It's terrific. Good job!
9/5/2004 c1 20Corner Girl
HAHA! That poem's funny. I mostly agree it with it-in that I don't understand how some of my friends like one person then change and then change and then change...lol (I've liked the same guy for almost a year...so you're probably scoffing at me now, lol...and of course I AM only 13...but still. My friend's bf of a year's parents met in middle school...haha). Anyway, though I think I *may* be in love (13? yeah right...) I really agree quite a bit with your poem...
20Corner GirlHAHA! That poem's funny. I mostly agree it with it-in that I don't understand how some of my friends like one person then change and then change and then change...lol (I've liked the same guy for almost a year...so you're probably scoffing at me now, lol...and of course I AM only 13...but still. My friend's bf of a year's parents met in middle school...haha). Anyway, though I think I *may* be in love (13? yeah right...) I really agree quite a bit with your poem...
7/14/2004 c1 3Fairytale Gurl
That was really good. i think boyfriends are complete wastes of time. lol. but i'm very anti-dating. It's exactly how i feel when some of my friends say they have a new crush or they're in love. I mean seriously weren't they saying the same thing about some1 else not more then a week ago. I mean how would they kno love...they're like 13 or 14 and completely flirtacious.
3Fairytale GurlThat was really good. i think boyfriends are complete wastes of time. lol. but i'm very anti-dating. It's exactly how i feel when some of my friends say they have a new crush or they're in love. I mean seriously weren't they saying the same thing about some1 else not more then a week ago. I mean how would they kno love...they're like 13 or 14 and completely flirtacious.