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1/11/2004 c1 22All Midnight Eyes
Love this poem. "Yesterday may be engraved"...very nice.
1/2/2004 c1 17OryssaV
That is one of the best(est) I read... First stanza is so honest, just makes me want to have someone like that in my life.
Second stanza is very time free and it is true that today is important... especially to lovers.
And "loving you" may sound childish when you say it up straight but it is very nicely engraved in your poem. It doesn't sound childish to me.
1/2/2004 c1 18desolus
*Nicely* put. It's simplicity, it's uncomplicated phrasings, makes it a wonderful poem. I loveded it. ^^
'only today we're watched by the heavens and
underneath the stars.'
- Sounds like something is missing, as though there is a part of the poem that was never written, or perhaps was, but was removed... Hm. I can't help but feel there's more to these sentences. It felt 'awkward'.
12/26/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Beautiful work.
~Heart of the Sword
12/26/2003 c1 6Casoria
Very good poem. Gets to the point, yet really makes a wonderful statement about feelings towards love and how we should look to today. Great job.

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