for Shelob12/16/2004 c1 
30Imladros
This one's amazing! You don't even try to imitate Tolkiens elvish or hobbit poem style but find a very own way to describe one of his most fascinating monsters ( have a picture of orcs in my mind, singing it as a song while carrying Frodo to their tower... )Great job, go on like this!
30ImladrosThis one's amazing! You don't even try to imitate Tolkiens elvish or hobbit poem style but find a very own way to describe one of his most fascinating monsters ( have a picture of orcs in my mind, singing it as a song while carrying Frodo to their tower... )Great job, go on like this!
6/27/2004 c1 3Prowling Muse
Spectacular poem. I believe if you were in Shelob's grasp, uh, she would probably still eat you, but make it as painless as possible.
I love the fifth stanza, as it makes me mindful of her venom[?].
3Prowling MuseSpectacular poem. I believe if you were in Shelob's grasp, uh, she would probably still eat you, but make it as painless as possible.
I love the fifth stanza, as it makes me mindful of her venom[?].
2/11/2004 c1 76CoolBeans18s
I loved Shelob! She's so awesome and creepy.. Wonderful description! You really painted a vivid picture of her!
~ CoolBeans18s
76CoolBeans18sI loved Shelob! She's so awesome and creepy.. Wonderful description! You really painted a vivid picture of her!
~ CoolBeans18s
1/5/2004 c1 106cosmo-queen
Great work. You portray the whole Shelob scene from ROTK very well. Shudder. That was one intense scene! Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenGreat work. You portray the whole Shelob scene from ROTK very well. Shudder. That was one intense scene! Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
1/3/2004 c1 53Lidless Eye
I loved the movie... the best movie of the year, by far, IMO. Can't wait for it to come out on DVD, I'll be watching the movie for a very long time.
You described Shelob very well... some very simple imagery was used, but it doesn't hurt to get to the point, right? =) Great work, write more!
~Lidless Eye
53Lidless EyeI loved the movie... the best movie of the year, by far, IMO. Can't wait for it to come out on DVD, I'll be watching the movie for a very long time.
You described Shelob very well... some very simple imagery was used, but it doesn't hurt to get to the point, right? =) Great work, write more!
~Lidless Eye
12/27/2003 c1 welcm2thdrkns
That was kewl! I love LOTR and Shelob was pretty cool looking! nice poem!
That was kewl! I love LOTR and Shelob was pretty cool looking! nice poem!
12/26/2003 c1 57teh tarik
I'm not afraid of spiders! That was an awesome description, though I haven't watched LOTR the 3rd part yet, but I've read the book and so I think your words are pretty accurate. The part about Shelob's *dead breath* was a lil creepy, though ^_^
57teh tarikI'm not afraid of spiders! That was an awesome description, though I haven't watched LOTR the 3rd part yet, but I've read the book and so I think your words are pretty accurate. The part about Shelob's *dead breath* was a lil creepy, though ^_^
12/26/2003 c1 binderem
Wow! I love it. I just saw The Return of the King, too. The description's very good!
Wow! I love it. I just saw The Return of the King, too. The description's very good!
12/26/2003 c1 3OtakuSailorV
Great! I just recently finished the 2nd book. (THe one where Shelob is actually in it) and she scared the crap out of me just reading about her. ^_^;; Great job! Ja ne!
3OtakuSailorVGreat! I just recently finished the 2nd book. (THe one where Shelob is actually in it) and she scared the crap out of me just reading about her. ^_^;; Great job! Ja ne!