12/26/2003 c1 251LegendaryPunk29
Great. But make this into couple stanzas and not only one. It will help it to flow betta and for readers, it will b easy for us to read. Nice poem tho, keep writing!
If u can, plz r and r some of my work too, it will mean a lot to me.
Thanks!
Great. But make this into couple stanzas and not only one. It will help it to flow betta and for readers, it will b easy for us to read. Nice poem tho, keep writing!
If u can, plz r and r some of my work too, it will mean a lot to me.
Thanks!