for Drunken Paradise5/7/2007 c1 
4They call me Tamara
I enjoy your writing style, but this seems very abrupt and unfinished, almost as if it were pulled from the middle of a story.
4They call me TamaraI enjoy your writing style, but this seems very abrupt and unfinished, almost as if it were pulled from the middle of a story.
2/11/2004 c1 39Charcoal Angel
Hey, thanks for the review. I really like your style of writing, and I love the last line in particular. Anyway, good job, keep it up!
39Charcoal AngelHey, thanks for the review. I really like your style of writing, and I love the last line in particular. Anyway, good job, keep it up!