
5/5/2003 c1
2Crusty-Diamonds
wowowowowowowow WOW this was just GREAT. Loved it so much, describes exactly how I feel sometimes. Adding it to my favourites (wish i could add some constructive critism but honestly I can't! It's too good!)

wowowowowowowow WOW this was just GREAT. Loved it so much, describes exactly how I feel sometimes. Adding it to my favourites (wish i could add some constructive critism but honestly I can't! It's too good!)
3/13/2003 c1 once in a blue moon
I was to lazy to sign in, but have the same penname
anywho, very nice poetry you've got here
only thing i'd change would be the "can't" into "can not" in the last stanza
you said in your summary you wanted to know where to put this. i'm not sure, but i think there's an inspirational section for poetry. i'm not sure though. maybe just a new genre.
anywho, keep up the good work!
I was to lazy to sign in, but have the same penname
anywho, very nice poetry you've got here
only thing i'd change would be the "can't" into "can not" in the last stanza
you said in your summary you wanted to know where to put this. i'm not sure, but i think there's an inspirational section for poetry. i'm not sure though. maybe just a new genre.
anywho, keep up the good work!
7/1/2001 c1
1PlasmaBomb
Wow, pretty good poem, Meow! I loved it very much! Good fic, two thumbs way, way up!^-^

Wow, pretty good poem, Meow! I loved it very much! Good fic, two thumbs way, way up!^-^
1/14/2001 c1
4Altaica
ohmigosh! that was soooooo great! do you mind if I put it up on my site? (i'll give you credit, of course...;-). Let me know!)

ohmigosh! that was soooooo great! do you mind if I put it up on my site? (i'll give you credit, of course...;-). Let me know!)
1/4/2001 c1
5Erik's Angel
That was moving. Sorry I can't help with your genre dilemma - I'm not sure where it should go, either. It's a lovely poem.

That was moving. Sorry I can't help with your genre dilemma - I'm not sure where it should go, either. It's a lovely poem.
12/22/2000 c1 E1
Good poem. Very interesting... It reminds me of a poem written by Paul Lawrence Dunbar and another by Maya Angelou. Are you aware of their work? I bet you are.
Again, good poem. Very interesting...
Good poem. Very interesting... It reminds me of a poem written by Paul Lawrence Dunbar and another by Maya Angelou. Are you aware of their work? I bet you are.
Again, good poem. Very interesting...