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So fast. It was good. I think that you did Dr. Whitmore's personality very well, with the differences between his thoughts and whatever came out of his mouth. Absolutely nothing wrong with this chapter. Why does he have feelings for her? i can see this going so incredibly far. I'm trying to think of any constructive criticsm. Hum...
Sorry. It's too good to be perfected.Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up. And your beautiful art!
Katelyn
So fast. It was good. I think that you did Dr. Whitmore's personality very well, with the differences between his thoughts and whatever came out of his mouth. Absolutely nothing wrong with this chapter. Why does he have feelings for her? i can see this going so incredibly far. I'm trying to think of any constructive criticsm. Hum...
Sorry. It's too good to be perfected.Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up. And your beautiful art!
Katelyn
5/30/2005 c2 False Ad
Excuse me. That was another entrancing chapter. It was upsetting too. I hate the feeling of loneliness. And to be fair, it's the real loneliness, not the 'damn-none-of-my-friends-are-in-this-class' kind. But it was intoxicating in a good kind of way. A lovely treat. And you could be seeing an update soon. But not this week. I still have school, remember? Anyways, I leave you with this review and my love.K
Excuse me. That was another entrancing chapter. It was upsetting too. I hate the feeling of loneliness. And to be fair, it's the real loneliness, not the 'damn-none-of-my-friends-are-in-this-class' kind. But it was intoxicating in a good kind of way. A lovely treat. And you could be seeing an update soon. But not this week. I still have school, remember? Anyways, I leave you with this review and my love.K
4/15/2004 c1 
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Wow, this is great... and so, so good. Oh you know what? I had a dream that I met you! Whoa! We went to a writing seminar I think. i don't quite remember. But i DO remember it was you!
Well, I hope to hear from you soon-
BrokenIce
4False AdvertisementWow, this is great... and so, so good. Oh you know what? I had a dream that I met you! Whoa! We went to a writing seminar I think. i don't quite remember. But i DO remember it was you!
Well, I hope to hear from you soon-
BrokenIce
12/30/2003 c1 4Persian Kittie
nice start...i like how the whole thing is very blurry and indistinct, almost like she's (he's?) high. but people w/ problems make for very good reading...especially when they're angsty...*blissful sigh* more please?
4Persian Kittienice start...i like how the whole thing is very blurry and indistinct, almost like she's (he's?) high. but people w/ problems make for very good reading...especially when they're angsty...*blissful sigh* more please?
12/28/2003 c1 30quietdrama22
Yep, it is a unique story. And I like it. You set the scene for the first chapter, not detailed, very general but made me want to read more of your stuff and more of this story. I dont know why, but I can't wait tillyou update.
Keep Writing :)
30quietdrama22Yep, it is a unique story. And I like it. You set the scene for the first chapter, not detailed, very general but made me want to read more of your stuff and more of this story. I dont know why, but I can't wait tillyou update.
Keep Writing :)
12/28/2003 c1 Ushi
This is... yes, strange.
But I like it. Is your character scizophrenic? 'Cause that'd be really interesting.
I'm curious as to what happened to him/her so that he/she ran away from his/her home. Update soon, that I may find out!
-Ursula
This is... yes, strange.
But I like it. Is your character scizophrenic? 'Cause that'd be really interesting.
I'm curious as to what happened to him/her so that he/she ran away from his/her home. Update soon, that I may find out!
-Ursula