
5/15/2004 c1
13Saxifrage
wow so far this is my favorrite of all your poems! it has so much meaning in it! how can i ever measure my poetry to yours? your so good!
saxifrage

wow so far this is my favorrite of all your poems! it has so much meaning in it! how can i ever measure my poetry to yours? your so good!
saxifrage
4/30/2004 c1
56Celest Covax
I liked it...especially "Mirror, Mirror, on the wall
I look to you for truth
The rest of the world cares not at all
So I’m labeled troubled youth"
The ending kinda threw me off but I can understand where you were coming from.

I liked it...especially "Mirror, Mirror, on the wall
I look to you for truth
The rest of the world cares not at all
So I’m labeled troubled youth"
The ending kinda threw me off but I can understand where you were coming from.
1/24/2004 c1
7ku
what i found is that i look a little better in a foggy mirror because my image is softened. so the damn mirror does lie to me.

what i found is that i look a little better in a foggy mirror because my image is softened. so the damn mirror does lie to me.
1/2/2004 c1
22Non-existent Puritanism
Um...different. Not bad, but the rhyme scheme is confusing, cuz they're sort of two rhymes crossing each other. Still not bad though.

Um...different. Not bad, but the rhyme scheme is confusing, cuz they're sort of two rhymes crossing each other. Still not bad though.
12/30/2003 c1
150sunstormed
that was awesome! i loved it! :puts on favorites:
thanks for the review btw!

that was awesome! i loved it! :puts on favorites:
thanks for the review btw!
12/29/2003 c1
34Whitesiren
This is good. I've always been fascianted with mirrors, how they could reveal how hey could hide. I also like the rhymin. Well done. ^^

This is good. I've always been fascianted with mirrors, how they could reveal how hey could hide. I also like the rhymin. Well done. ^^