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for Father and Young Girl

5/23/2004 c1 BestSkeptic
3/7/2004 c1 6Gilee7
Wow. I love this. You're an excellent writer. So many stories lack description and you can't picture what's taking place within the story in your head because of that. But with you, you describe everything so beautifully and so vividly that yeah, you have a perfect picture of everything. I felt like I was there with the little girl and her father.
I also love how you write stories about things that are so real, rather than some fantasy island or some vampiric romance triangle that has been done 50 billion times. But yeah...excellent job. I really like this.
And thanks for checking out some of my stuff!
2/3/2004 c1 7ku
that was really, really good. very nice, cute, and sweet...and it's quite a common thing nowadays with 50-60% divorce rates.
1/4/2004 c1 1Lauren K
This is good! I like the way it starts out in perfect paradise, then the paradise melts away a bit to show reality. Kudos! (hehe I love that word)

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