for The Count Down2/25/2004 c5 heavenleigh5
Geez Dev sure got wasted. Just as well her knight in shinin armour was there to save her ;). I wanna see how their relationship develops.. so update soon! Please!
HeavenLeigh xx
Geez Dev sure got wasted. Just as well her knight in shinin armour was there to save her ;). I wanna see how their relationship develops.. so update soon! Please!
HeavenLeigh xx
2/25/2004 c4 heavenleigh5
I like the way you've encorportated the hug and a way of telling us more about their relationship, it's really effective. This is really good and im adding it to my favs :D.
I like Matt, he sounds like a really nice guy :D seems ace wasn't as cute as i first thought...
HeavenLeigh xx
I like the way you've encorportated the hug and a way of telling us more about their relationship, it's really effective. This is really good and im adding it to my favs :D.
I like Matt, he sounds like a really nice guy :D seems ace wasn't as cute as i first thought...
HeavenLeigh xx
2/25/2004 c3 heavenleigh5
AWW Derek is such an arrogant asshole. Something bad should happen to him - soon. Good on Devin for not falling for him
HeavenLeigh xx
AWW Derek is such an arrogant asshole. Something bad should happen to him - soon. Good on Devin for not falling for him
HeavenLeigh xx
2/25/2004 c2 heavenleigh5
This is a good chapter too but maybe you should describe the people and places a bit more, so we can visualize them. Ace sounds cute :p
HeavenLeigh xx
This is a good chapter too but maybe you should describe the people and places a bit more, so we can visualize them. Ace sounds cute :p
HeavenLeigh xx
2/25/2004 c1 heavenleigh5
This is a great chapter. I'm guesing Derek is the guy that she went on a few dates with... I can't wait to see what happens.
Thanks for reviewing my story btw :D
HeavenLeigh xx
This is a great chapter. I'm guesing Derek is the guy that she went on a few dates with... I can't wait to see what happens.
Thanks for reviewing my story btw :D
HeavenLeigh xx
1/10/2004 c2 Sweet-Child03
Good chapie! It was short tho =(. oh well, update soon plz.
~*~*Sweet-Child03~*~*
Good chapie! It was short tho =(. oh well, update soon plz.
~*~*Sweet-Child03~*~*
1/4/2004 c2 
1lOvErcHicK20o0
Ah what the heck is going on i cannot understand any of it? Maybe by its the lack of stability and it keeps swtcing POV and you keep changing suybjects so i cannot grasp onto anything or maybe because your grammar is horrendous that it takes me most of my time just to understand your sentences. to make it short and sweet, please rewrite, hun, because at this rate it just blows.
1lOvErcHicK20o0Ah what the heck is going on i cannot understand any of it? Maybe by its the lack of stability and it keeps swtcing POV and you keep changing suybjects so i cannot grasp onto anything or maybe because your grammar is horrendous that it takes me most of my time just to understand your sentences. to make it short and sweet, please rewrite, hun, because at this rate it just blows.
1/3/2004 c1 1Sweet-Child03
U MUST CONTINUE! i luv this story! plz update soon! this story is goin on my favs.! =) ~*~*Later Dayz~*~*
1Sweet-Child03U MUST CONTINUE! i luv this story! plz update soon! this story is goin on my favs.! =) ~*~*Later Dayz~*~*