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7/8/2006 c2 7family alive
This is a truly eerie story. My stomach is queasy just reading it xD

I know you haven't updated in awhile, but please continue!

-Fee
4/11/2006 c1 1Mooncatcher
Love it Please undate soon
3/21/2006 c1 59Frore
That was so creepy! I loved it!You obviously have some writing talents, and I think my only criticism on this piece would be to add a few more similes and stuff in there... but really, a rib bone? I've never seen anyone incorporate that into a story before! I congratulate you.
1/18/2006 c2 6Rastaban Bright
Evil incarnate. evil. evil. evil!

evill I tell you!
1/18/2006 c1 Rastaban Bright
O.O horrified.

0.0 scary.
3/26/2005 c2 1StomachButterflies
I love horror movies and horror stories and evil children really tickle my fancy. I like what you did with the teddy bear-An accomplice is needed for the most wicked of wicked!
12/25/2004 c2 56whatsapenname
fantasmic,i love your writing. do i smell an update? ;)~whatsa~
12/20/2004 c2 90poetic abortion
O.O Holy shit. This is awesome. Scary shit man. Scary. O.O

~ Noelle ~
12/6/2004 c2 10angelusgrl
What an evil child. Very good. Is there anymore?
10/31/2004 c2 Shadow
This is an awesome story. Keep it up!
7/25/2004 c2 4Alicia Marianne
I loved it. I hope you'll update soon.
6/14/2004 c2 AllSmiles
Poor poor Anthony. Ah well. You are to blame, of course.
Who knew Death could be cuddly?
6/14/2004 c1 AllSmiles
What a lovely home video this would have made. o_o
6/2/2004 c1 13TaurNuFuin
Pretty damn good. I especially liked your description of the mother bursting open and Lilith's birth.
The one thing is that it kind've seems like you might be able to elaborate on some of the events in the plot. Or perhaps not, as they are quite effective the way they are.
4/25/2004 c2 21Seremela Minyatur
wow, great story, pretty freaky. update soon.
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