for Beach in Midsummer2/15/2004 c1 
55AtticusOnline
People say i'm good at writing poetry and songs, but for the life of me i don't understand others poetry well. Maybe i can't write at all! This seems good but also it seems bleak. Is humanity supposed to be bleak? Or are we already bleak?
55AtticusOnlinePeople say i'm good at writing poetry and songs, but for the life of me i don't understand others poetry well. Maybe i can't write at all! This seems good but also it seems bleak. Is humanity supposed to be bleak? Or are we already bleak?
2/9/2004 c1 32Arietti
Nah-ha! XD It makes me want to go to the beach. *pouts* Too bad I live out in the middle of nowhere... ^^ It's good!
32AriettiNah-ha! XD It makes me want to go to the beach. *pouts* Too bad I live out in the middle of nowhere... ^^ It's good!
1/30/2004 c1 50Chandra-Moon
i liked this poem...im not sure if i am getting at what u meant about humanity. Is it kind of about how life goes, with the waves? The sand gets to sit there awhile, but is eventually drawn back into the tide.
Anywhere close?
Lol...I like your work, you have a great deal of talent.
50Chandra-Mooni liked this poem...im not sure if i am getting at what u meant about humanity. Is it kind of about how life goes, with the waves? The sand gets to sit there awhile, but is eventually drawn back into the tide.
Anywhere close?
Lol...I like your work, you have a great deal of talent.
1/21/2004 c1 3Tears of Atlantis
yeah your poem... don't be offended, but what are you trying to say anyway? that we're all just grains of sand in an endless sea? huh? is that it? well i think it should die! i think YOU should die! and with that said, i really liked this poem, especially the last two lines because when you read them you can just imagine these tiny little grains washing off the beach and ending up who-knows-where... maybe just beyond atlantis or maybe in my SWIMSUIT! darn sand. yes, but anyway, very soothing, again, love the use of repetition, like waves, yes nice indeed. [and yes i suppose it does help to be sleepy! ;)]
3Tears of Atlantisyeah your poem... don't be offended, but what are you trying to say anyway? that we're all just grains of sand in an endless sea? huh? is that it? well i think it should die! i think YOU should die! and with that said, i really liked this poem, especially the last two lines because when you read them you can just imagine these tiny little grains washing off the beach and ending up who-knows-where... maybe just beyond atlantis or maybe in my SWIMSUIT! darn sand. yes, but anyway, very soothing, again, love the use of repetition, like waves, yes nice indeed. [and yes i suppose it does help to be sleepy! ;)]