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7/8/2006 c1 12Nikki's Evil Doppleganger
Very nice. It really makes you think about the way that we treat horses. I like it. But it's sad too, but I guess everyone will remember Elmer.
1/1/2004 c1 2Ashley Lynn Anderson
I like how, for once, we get to see from the horse's point of view instead of that of the human being. You also did a very good job of showing us just how pissed off Elmer is at the human race. However, the ending leaves me a little unsatisfied. Elmer goes ranting on and on and on throughout the entire story, telling us how he dislikes humans, and yet at the end he just plans to start a fire. In my opinion, I think a little more should be added to the fire, maybe somehow connecting the fire and the humans in some thought-provoking way, and lead it all up to the point where either Elmer dies in the fire or he escapes the fire. I don't know, this is just my opinion, but I felt a little unsatisfied with the ending.
1/1/2004 c1 8Tweed Socks
Such A Good Story. It is very true too.

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