
7/31/2005 c1
20Pheobe Meryll
Again, I really enjoyed this poem. It has the proper bitter nuance to it, as are the thoughts of a dissapointed idealist. Very foreboding ending..."caught in the wormhole/never to escape/never." Well done!

Again, I really enjoyed this poem. It has the proper bitter nuance to it, as are the thoughts of a dissapointed idealist. Very foreboding ending..."caught in the wormhole/never to escape/never." Well done!