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4/4/2004 c1 1Genius-Ben
uh... that was pretty interesting. It took me a while to catch on.
1/26/2004 c1 carmice3
I like this.
It's cool how you only hint that the man has (presumably) just killed a bunch of folk. It leaves you wondering in the first half, and thinking in the second.
It's an excelent peice of description.
1/20/2004 c1 9Ryokitty
::blinks, slowly:: That was well written, and would leave a reader asking questions.. Like this, did they blow him up because he killed someone? And... who was he? And who blew him up? And did he already have a bomb inside his head or something? Dude, that was sick! And why did he flick blood on their faces? And AND AND AND...
::gets shot::
1/3/2004 c1 28the tuesday after
There's a lot of mystery to this piece. I'm not sure if it was the intention but I can't help but wonder what happened.
L.

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