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7IcanzIIravor
Eh...it was a Sarah ending. It was alright. I am glad she has grown up and become a better person. Sometimes it takes having a kid to put things into perspective. :)
7IcanzIIravorEh...it was a Sarah ending. It was alright. I am glad she has grown up and become a better person. Sometimes it takes having a kid to put things into perspective. :)
5/1/2016 c30 IcanzIIravor
Well, this fits with Sarah's nature and mentality. I think she is afraid of happiness so subconsciously sabotages things. I don't know whether to strangle her and Chad or just get popcorn and watch the show.
Well, this fits with Sarah's nature and mentality. I think she is afraid of happiness so subconsciously sabotages things. I don't know whether to strangle her and Chad or just get popcorn and watch the show.
5/1/2016 c29 IcanzIIravor
This to me is the best chapter of the sequel. We finally get to see Chad open up and bare his soul. We know how fragile and crazy Sarah is (she should probably go on Dr. Phil), but it is great to finally cut through the BS with Chad.
This to me is the best chapter of the sequel. We finally get to see Chad open up and bare his soul. We know how fragile and crazy Sarah is (she should probably go on Dr. Phil), but it is great to finally cut through the BS with Chad.
4/30/2016 c12 IcanzIIravor
Chad is usually right. I think his own upbringing makes it hard for him to really convey the right tone of voice, so he comes off as flippant or uncaring. He is still right though. *nods wisely*
Chad is usually right. I think his own upbringing makes it hard for him to really convey the right tone of voice, so he comes off as flippant or uncaring. He is still right though. *nods wisely*
9/21/2013 c32 AnonymousReads
Sarah annoyed me so much in both stories. She can never accept responsibility for her actions because its ALWAYS someone else's fault. It takes her forever to realize that it's partially her fault too. Natalie did do a bitch move though and is the only time she was right about it not being her fault. Sarah needs to learn to take the blame sometimes. She was also a bit of a hoe. I just think she was a bit too uptight bitchy I can do no wrong because I'm better than everyone. I don't know how chad puts up with her. Great story. :)
Sarah annoyed me so much in both stories. She can never accept responsibility for her actions because its ALWAYS someone else's fault. It takes her forever to realize that it's partially her fault too. Natalie did do a bitch move though and is the only time she was right about it not being her fault. Sarah needs to learn to take the blame sometimes. She was also a bit of a hoe. I just think she was a bit too uptight bitchy I can do no wrong because I'm better than everyone. I don't know how chad puts up with her. Great story. :)
6/30/2009 c32 poll
ok, i did not like this story at all. sarah was a complete s-lu-t. she slept with half the men she came across, she cheated on her so called love, and never told him. it was really painful for me to finish this story.
ok, i did not like this story at all. sarah was a complete s-lu-t. she slept with half the men she came across, she cheated on her so called love, and never told him. it was really painful for me to finish this story.
6/30/2009 c30 lolo
no offence, but this story is really bad. why is she such a slut, and has to sleep with every guy she meets? she is no better than a hooker, and this story is really trashy.
no offence, but this story is really bad. why is she such a slut, and has to sleep with every guy she meets? she is no better than a hooker, and this story is really trashy.
10/11/2007 c32 9Stahlut
wow I actually finally read this. I read yor first story, but never got around to this one. anyway I really did like it. I htink it was a good conclusion, and it worked really well. a great way to end such a dramatic story.
9Stahlutwow I actually finally read this. I read yor first story, but never got around to this one. anyway I really did like it. I htink it was a good conclusion, and it worked really well. a great way to end such a dramatic story.
8/30/2007 c1 christinaxxyo
I think it's interesting how her life has changed into this. I liked how you made her write the original. :)
I think it's interesting how her life has changed into this. I liked how you made her write the original. :)
6/16/2007 c32 7LadyLush
aw i loved this story (and the prequel to thi as well) i think you're a fabulous story and your plots are amazing. keep up the good work
x
7LadyLushaw i loved this story (and the prequel to thi as well) i think you're a fabulous story and your plots are amazing. keep up the good work
x
5/31/2007 c32 IljimaE
hi!this was such a nice story. it was a touching one..atfirst i didnt like this same as through the words of gossip..truthfully i thought it was such a trash..like sarah was so always in trouble due to her hormones i feel like she was so addicted to * and i feel engrossed with the main character and same to chad! who was so immature in the first sequel and so was hard to understand whether he loved her...and I also didnt like the way there was lot of * and you even vividly described every bit of it. like it was even a necessity to describe the a french kiss but well i think i liked the last part...i read the story as positive as possible and i think i like how you made this story that even such a trash could have hope and to start renewing her life that as long as your living there's time to change and evrything...its so inspiring...
i just really disliked the character whom i can say was all pathetic or rather sexualy aroused like everytime but then there were odd man out that michael williams and jordan walteers was nice...sadly there wasn''t any happy ending to them...
i disgust natasha ...she so have no right to use Jordan pity hin ...she deserves every bit of revenge!she the whore!pity jordan! anyway really thanx for the story...
ps. wouldn't it be nice if the girls name was indicated?haha!
hi!this was such a nice story. it was a touching one..atfirst i didnt like this same as through the words of gossip..truthfully i thought it was such a trash..like sarah was so always in trouble due to her hormones i feel like she was so addicted to * and i feel engrossed with the main character and same to chad! who was so immature in the first sequel and so was hard to understand whether he loved her...and I also didnt like the way there was lot of * and you even vividly described every bit of it. like it was even a necessity to describe the a french kiss but well i think i liked the last part...i read the story as positive as possible and i think i like how you made this story that even such a trash could have hope and to start renewing her life that as long as your living there's time to change and evrything...its so inspiring...
i just really disliked the character whom i can say was all pathetic or rather sexualy aroused like everytime but then there were odd man out that michael williams and jordan walteers was nice...sadly there wasn''t any happy ending to them...
i disgust natasha ...she so have no right to use Jordan pity hin ...she deserves every bit of revenge!she the whore!pity jordan! anyway really thanx for the story...
ps. wouldn't it be nice if the girls name was indicated?haha!
5/21/2007 c31 1honey splattered brains
YES. I love the ending. I did NOT expect Jordan, and SCOTT of all the people. I LOVE SCOTT. I WANT HIS BABIES
1honey splattered brainsYES. I love the ending. I did NOT expect Jordan, and SCOTT of all the people. I LOVE SCOTT. I WANT HIS BABIES