for The Gingerbread Man Strikes Again!3/21/2004 c1 
19Cardinal Chuck
I laughed a few times. Like the shortbread lady...brilliant. and the continuous gingerbread man song thing...also brilliant. the mayor was funny too. There was something else that I laughed at for a long time...but I can't remember what it was...oh yeah the Granny. I loved the granny. Best part of the thing. The granny. Anyway, I've wanted to do a twisted fairy tale for some time. I don't plan on doing it like a script, but I don't know...I liked this. Good work.
19Cardinal ChuckI laughed a few times. Like the shortbread lady...brilliant. and the continuous gingerbread man song thing...also brilliant. the mayor was funny too. There was something else that I laughed at for a long time...but I can't remember what it was...oh yeah the Granny. I loved the granny. Best part of the thing. The granny. Anyway, I've wanted to do a twisted fairy tale for some time. I don't plan on doing it like a script, but I don't know...I liked this. Good work.
2/9/2004 c1 9Alteng
One turns deserves another . . . and I still am not a poet!
Anyway, there are parts of this story that could be really funny. I did like the end. Daniel and Red's baby, oh my . . . well maybe . . .
Daniel and Camille needed to be drawing that welfare check you know! ;)
The wedding bit, well, Daniel did kind of sort of said "I do"... That could always be changed to , uh . . . . :) He was dumb enough! (Dumb is a good thing in comedy stories, mind you. I'm trying to write a story where the main two characters have problems counting to 10 with gloves off!)
The mayor was really good with the double talk. That makes for a good politician character.
9AltengOne turns deserves another . . . and I still am not a poet!
Anyway, there are parts of this story that could be really funny. I did like the end. Daniel and Red's baby, oh my . . . well maybe . . .
Daniel and Camille needed to be drawing that welfare check you know! ;)
The wedding bit, well, Daniel did kind of sort of said "I do"... That could always be changed to , uh . . . . :) He was dumb enough! (Dumb is a good thing in comedy stories, mind you. I'm trying to write a story where the main two characters have problems counting to 10 with gloves off!)
The mayor was really good with the double talk. That makes for a good politician character.
1/10/2004 c1 3funkyblueeyes
Hehe you have too many stories to review! This was funny.
I'll try to stop reviewing you now... I'll try...
3funkyblueeyesHehe you have too many stories to review! This was funny.
I'll try to stop reviewing you now... I'll try...
1/4/2004 c1 11M. Turnbull
Heh heh, very amusing. I liked it a lot. my favourite bit is at the wedding when Camille is trying to tell Daniel that she loves him and he's not listening. That was unexpected and amusing. Hehe.
11M. TurnbullHeh heh, very amusing. I liked it a lot. my favourite bit is at the wedding when Camille is trying to tell Daniel that she loves him and he's not listening. That was unexpected and amusing. Hehe.