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3/21/2004 c1 19Cardinal Chuck
I laughed a few times. Like the shortbread lady...brilliant. and the continuous gingerbread man song thing...also brilliant. the mayor was funny too. There was something else that I laughed at for a long time...but I can't remember what it was...oh yeah the Granny. I loved the granny. Best part of the thing. The granny. Anyway, I've wanted to do a twisted fairy tale for some time. I don't plan on doing it like a script, but I don't know...I liked this. Good work.
2/9/2004 c1 9Alteng
One turns deserves another . . . and I still am not a poet!
Anyway, there are parts of this story that could be really funny. I did like the end. Daniel and Red's baby, oh my . . . well maybe . . .
Daniel and Camille needed to be drawing that welfare check you know! ;)
The wedding bit, well, Daniel did kind of sort of said "I do"... That could always be changed to , uh . . . . :) He was dumb enough! (Dumb is a good thing in comedy stories, mind you. I'm trying to write a story where the main two characters have problems counting to 10 with gloves off!)
The mayor was really good with the double talk. That makes for a good politician character.
1/10/2004 c1 3funkyblueeyes
Hehe you have too many stories to review! This was funny.
I'll try to stop reviewing you now... I'll try...
1/4/2004 c1 11M. Turnbull
Heh heh, very amusing. I liked it a lot. my favourite bit is at the wedding when Camille is trying to tell Daniel that she loves him and he's not listening. That was unexpected and amusing. Hehe.
1/2/2004 c1 M.Katherine S
I liked it, I thought it was funny.

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