for Spinning Yarns2/4/2004 c20 abcdefgh12
Yay! Happy chapter! How old's Pablo? He was hilarious!
Anywho, all your next stories sound exciting, but I vote...Hyacinth Blooming.
Yay! Happy chapter! How old's Pablo? He was hilarious!
Anywho, all your next stories sound exciting, but I vote...Hyacinth Blooming.
2/4/2004 c20 
8Damson Rhee
Hey! I have one thing to point out, and that's just that in older-set stories like this one, usually the phrase "making out" isn't really used, as far as i know. I would think they'd use a phrase like "kissing passionately" or something like that. But I love this story, it's really good, and you're a great writer. I can't wait to see what happens!
For your next story, I think you should either do Lady of the Brethren or Hyacinth Blooming. I love pirate stories, and I escpecially like the idea of a girl pirate. But i also like history stories. I have a historic piece myself. So my vote is a tie between Lady of the Brethren and Hyacinth Blooming.
Namarie,
Damson Rhee
8Damson RheeHey! I have one thing to point out, and that's just that in older-set stories like this one, usually the phrase "making out" isn't really used, as far as i know. I would think they'd use a phrase like "kissing passionately" or something like that. But I love this story, it's really good, and you're a great writer. I can't wait to see what happens!
For your next story, I think you should either do Lady of the Brethren or Hyacinth Blooming. I love pirate stories, and I escpecially like the idea of a girl pirate. But i also like history stories. I have a historic piece myself. So my vote is a tie between Lady of the Brethren and Hyacinth Blooming.
Namarie,
Damson Rhee
2/4/2004 c20 13inAnutshelLkizZ
heey its me again! great job on the chappies. i have a bad feeling about pablo. o well. oh yes, and i feel so important i get to vote! weehee! i vote for to rescue a prince. soundz good. keep it up!-
kizz*
p.s thanx a billion for the reviews!
13inAnutshelLkizZheey its me again! great job on the chappies. i have a bad feeling about pablo. o well. oh yes, and i feel so important i get to vote! weehee! i vote for to rescue a prince. soundz good. keep it up!-
kizz*
p.s thanx a billion for the reviews!
2/4/2004 c20 passion101
I think I'll go with the "to rescue a prince" one. Anyway, I liked this chapter. It was pretty funny when they got caught making out, lol.
I think I'll go with the "to rescue a prince" one. Anyway, I liked this chapter. It was pretty funny when they got caught making out, lol.
1/31/2004 c19 6WickedIceMaiden
*blinks* wow... that one had alot to digest, for a small chapter. So lets see the old lady is in dire need of company so she lets them stay? wow! nice old lady. Well till next time,
WIM
6WickedIceMaiden*blinks* wow... that one had alot to digest, for a small chapter. So lets see the old lady is in dire need of company so she lets them stay? wow! nice old lady. Well till next time,
WIM
1/31/2004 c19 JustDuck
Bow Chika Bow Bow! ::wiggles eyebrows::
I like Maria G.J.D.N.T.M.D.L.R.M. Smith! Very intuitive and seem to have a sense of humor!
Tori, Tori, Tori - books are GOOD! They're cheaper than a cruise, and more entertaining than watching paint dry.
Bow Chika Bow Bow! ::wiggles eyebrows::
I like Maria G.J.D.N.T.M.D.L.R.M. Smith! Very intuitive and seem to have a sense of humor!
Tori, Tori, Tori - books are GOOD! They're cheaper than a cruise, and more entertaining than watching paint dry.
1/31/2004 c19 passion101
yay u updated! Anywho, I wonder wuts to become of this "stay" at the island. Can't wait to find out!
yay u updated! Anywho, I wonder wuts to become of this "stay" at the island. Can't wait to find out!
1/31/2004 c19 abcdefgh12
Great chapter!
"I am Maria Gonzales Jesusa De Nadia Toloma Marquesa De la Rosa Martina," she took a deep breath, "Smith."
Was my favorite part. The descriptions of Maria and her shop were vivid and painted a lovely picture for the reader. Please keep up the good work.
Great chapter!
"I am Maria Gonzales Jesusa De Nadia Toloma Marquesa De la Rosa Martina," she took a deep breath, "Smith."
Was my favorite part. The descriptions of Maria and her shop were vivid and painted a lovely picture for the reader. Please keep up the good work.
1/29/2004 c18 JustDuck
Black, black, and more black? Hooray! A baby blue! :D
I'm not quite sure how I feel about the interlude between Jahson and Tori. The seem to be kindred spirits, but that doesn't necessarily mean a good match.
It figures that as soon as I mention your updating streak that I would then have to wait a few days for a new update! :D I'm just teasin' - I think it's awesome thatyou can write so quick!
::wink::
Black, black, and more black? Hooray! A baby blue! :D
I'm not quite sure how I feel about the interlude between Jahson and Tori. The seem to be kindred spirits, but that doesn't necessarily mean a good match.
It figures that as soon as I mention your updating streak that I would then have to wait a few days for a new update! :D I'm just teasin' - I think it's awesome thatyou can write so quick!
::wink::
1/29/2004 c18 13inAnutshelLkizZ
aw. so cute! its so nice to see things looking happy-er for them both. please keep updating your doing a great job!-
kizz*
13inAnutshelLkizZaw. so cute! its so nice to see things looking happy-er for them both. please keep updating your doing a great job!-
kizz*
1/29/2004 c18 passion101
yay, a happy chapter! I still don't completely trust nick, but maybe in time I will. Oh yeah, and could u try and make the chapters just a little longer?
yay, a happy chapter! I still don't completely trust nick, but maybe in time I will. Oh yeah, and could u try and make the chapters just a little longer?
1/29/2004 c18 abcdefgh12
Loved this chappie! Tori must be confused with Jahson and Nick, but I think I prefer Nick as her lover and Jahson as a friend. It just seems better that way.
When Nick said, "It's ok, this man's a fashion genius,"
Totally reminded me of Queer Eye for the Straight Guy, and I laughed out loud.
Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!
Loved this chappie! Tori must be confused with Jahson and Nick, but I think I prefer Nick as her lover and Jahson as a friend. It just seems better that way.
When Nick said, "It's ok, this man's a fashion genius,"
Totally reminded me of Queer Eye for the Straight Guy, and I laughed out loud.
Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!