for i follow footprints1/18/2004 c1 
15BecomingMyself
Very, very nice imagery, great lines, a solid trail to follow the storyline, good flow, very well written...
Great!
15BecomingMyselfVery, very nice imagery, great lines, a solid trail to follow the storyline, good flow, very well written...
Great!
1/2/2004 c1 klaskglkhdg
Lurve it. ^^
Especially the last stanza; and the realization of the last line. Write more.
Lurve it. ^^
Especially the last stanza; and the realization of the last line. Write more.
1/2/2004 c1 4watergoddess1
Lovely, lovely. I adore it! Especially the line "right, regardless of whether" because I thought of weather and that fits too, and, yeah.
4watergoddess1Lovely, lovely. I adore it! Especially the line "right, regardless of whether" because I thought of weather and that fits too, and, yeah.